黄洋界
探花
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 Posted: 2007-09-24 08:06:48 Post subject: 忆秦娥 中秋 |
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忆秦娥 中秋
乡清切
长江滚滚山城月
山城月
乘舟东去
浪花如雪
呼归石上伤离别
年年岁岁中秋节
中秋节
音书再续
感同凉热
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 12:51:33 Post subject: |
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第一句有错字,"清"字应为"情"字.
祝福各位诗友中秋节好!
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冰清
同进士出身
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 13:40:07 Post subject: |
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情真,意切,韵律美！
问候佳节！ |
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 17:48:58 Post subject: |
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| 节日快乐 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 18:22:48 Post subject: |
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谢冰清老师雅评，祝白水在“华河杯“获奖。
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 19:15:56 Post subject: |
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好一首工整.流畅.深情的<忆秦娥>! 学习了.
祝中秋快乐!
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2007-09-25 06:14:05 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云兄鼓励，节日好！
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