老山
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Joined: 05 May 2007
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 Posted: 2007-09-23 21:06:29 Post subject: 中秋寄台湾雄章兄 |
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中秋寄台湾雄章兄
又见孤鸿掠碧华，
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒独对月，
莫使秋光摧落花。 |
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老山
秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007
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| Posted: 2007-09-23 21:39:56 Post subject: 更正 |
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<中秋寄台湾雄章兄>诗中"江楼把酒独对月"的"独"改作"孤":
又见孤鸿掠碧华，
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒孤对月，
莫使秋光摧落花。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 11:22:42 Post subject: |
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雾海云山看月华，
吟鞭东望是天涯。
断柯憀恨情难了，
诉怨相依叹落花 |
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老山
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| Posted: 2007-09-24 18:10:51 Post subject: 冰清说得对 |
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冰清说得对,在中秋节,对于相隔天涯的每个人,都会有"断柯憀恨情难了,
诉怨相依叹落花"之感啊! |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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wenshan
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 112
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2007-10-02 19:24:46 Post subject: |
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良夕中秋赏月华，
婵娟千里共云涯。
登楼翘首乡心起，
一脉根连两岸花。
(加拿大/闻山2007)
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