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中秋寄台湾雄章兄
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PostPosted: 2007-09-23 21:06:29    Post subject: 中秋寄台湾雄章兄 Reply with quote



中秋寄台湾雄章兄

又见孤鸿掠碧华,
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒独对月,
莫使秋光摧落花。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-23 21:39:56    Post subject: 更正 Reply with quote



<中秋寄台湾雄章兄>诗中"江楼把酒独对月"的"独"改作"孤":

又见孤鸿掠碧华,
依依两地叹天涯。
江楼把酒孤对月,
莫使秋光摧落花。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 11:22:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

雾海云山看月华,
吟鞭东望是天涯。
断柯憀恨情难了,
诉怨相依叹落花
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 18:10:51    Post subject: 冰清说得对 Reply with quote

冰清说得对,在中秋节,对于相隔天涯的每个人,都会有"断柯憀恨情难了,
诉怨相依叹落花"之感啊!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 04:47:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=8204

中秋快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 19:24:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

良夕中秋赏月华,
婵娟千里共云涯。
登楼翘首乡心起,
一脉根连两岸花。

(加拿大/闻山2007)
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