| 博弈 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-21 09:12:39    Post subject: 我想寫一首寫實 |   |  
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				| 我想寫一首寫實 從屈原開始
 經過杜甫的詩
 毛澤東的詞
 還有喬治布什的錯別字
 觀照當世, 迴旋的時差
 風雨如晦, 雞鳴不已
 麥當勞的廣告在耳邊
 此刻, 填飽肚子也很寫實
 旗袍終於開放成晚禮服
 換個角度 天足不美如D乳
 自蠢, 大唐貴妃當如是
 
 
 
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		| William Zhou周道模 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-21 14:31:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 古今中外,神游时空;诗人胆大,剪裁时空又重组时空。 _________________
 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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		| 子花 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-21 18:10:00    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 来学习!!!  |  | 
	
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		| 杨海军 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-21 18:10:26    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 此诗做为一种久别的表现方式,仍给人一些思考。有必要提一下!!向诗人问好!! _________________
 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
 ——拙作《离开村庄》
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		| 下一个偶像是野兽 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-21 19:59:46    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 有意思。呵呵,问好。 _________________
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-22 03:05:21    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 換個角度 天足不美如D乳 自蠢, 大唐貴妃當如是
 
 
 <> 同道中人 :)
 
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 乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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		| 半溪明月 榜眼
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-22 03:35:27    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 換個角度 天足不美如D乳 自蠢, 大唐貴妃當如是
 
 
 <> 同道中人 :)
 
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 嫌天足不美,你们男人裹小脚美给我们看看~
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		| 博弈 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-22 13:12:14    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 半溪明月 wrote: |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 換個角度 天足不美如D乳 自蠢, 大唐貴妃當如是
 
 
 <> 同道中人 :)
 
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 嫌天足不美,你们男人裹小脚美给我们看看~
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 哇 快寫會惹禍
   大家都別裹著
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		| Lake 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-23 19:28:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 別裹著, What's  如D乳 ? _________________
 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-09-23 19:48:54    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 曾经专门写过一组女人的脚, 啥时候翻出来帖这  |  | 
	
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