黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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 Posted: 2007-09-22 06:42:55 Post subject: 七绝 呈白云闲人 |
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七绝 呈白云闲人
白榭青松花径好
云山赏瀑听天箫
闲庭信步浑无界
人世沧桑处处娇
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2007-09-22 20:27:28 Post subject: |
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谢谢黄兄!好一首精彩藏头诗!
步韵和七绝一首,请多多指导!
.... 致 谢....
< 七 绝 >
黄 菊 竞 芳 秋 色 好 ,
洋 洋 枫 韵 伴 清 箫 .
界 尘 长 宜 闲 庭 步 ,
兄 赋 藏 头 字 字 娇 .
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-09-22 22:36:44 Post subject: |
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| 意蕴婉转流畅，唱和均好。 |
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游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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| Posted: 2007-09-23 00:40:41 Post subject: |
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欣赏二位的唱和。
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2007-09-23 08:37:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪和游兄! 请多指导!
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-09-25 10:46:52 Post subject: |
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闲庭信步浑无界 人世沧桑处处娇
妙! |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-09-25 11:20:19 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师点评，节日好！
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