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-----------九月二十二号
南岩
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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 17:11:52    Post subject: -----------九月二十二号 Reply with quote

九月二十二号

---南岩

<一>

我的眼睛里清水一样,没有客人
点亮的灯芯一动不动
声音从耳根滑过,门是关上的
似乎好久,左手的温暖传给右手一次

<二>

一天早晨,我眼睛上蜻蜓的翅膀打开
把我包围的呼吸润着露水
是的,躺下来
一只小鸟轻轻地动了一下羽毛

<三>

一小束阳光从窗户的拐角滴落
哦,期待柔声地叫唤
我要把蜜蜂的青春飘过一朵桂花
今年九月,并不缺少写诗的日子


<四>

一口活人的气掉下来摔断了女子
水下的肢体,透明的下午
潜水的兴趣呛过喉咙七次
头一回躺在大大的双人床




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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 19:28:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活的小感触,加上现代诗风的语感,写得轻松,难以震撼心灵。
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