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摘掉眼镜看你（临屏一首，搞笑）

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-09-22 18:55:00 Post subject: 摘掉眼镜看你（临屏一首，搞笑）

摘掉眼镜看你文/半溪明月朋友，请保持你的神秘蟠多拉的盒子一但打开美好的鸽子将飞出想象之外默默关心又各自独立看我时，请摘掉眼镜摘掉眼镜，看你的时候你有一种光耀，我有一份朦胧非要举起望远镜月球的表面全是伤痕 2007-9-23

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-22 19:12:36 Post subject:

摘掉彩云看你，你把忧愁照得晶莹。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2007-09-23 07:03:46 Post subject:

呵呵,距离美 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-09-23 15:03:45 Post subject:

蟠多拉的盒子一但打开美好的鸽子将飞出想象之外发誓这一生不戴眼镜！！！问好半溪明月诗人！！多日不见你好吗？ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

蓝冰
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Posted: 2007-09-23 16:54:47 Post subject:

呵呵, 朦胧的美. 问好月亮

半溪明月
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半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-09-23 21:08:31 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

摘掉彩云看你，你把忧愁照得晶莹。

这句话又美又丰富~问好周!中秋快乐!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-23 21:12:34 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

呵呵,距离美

是的,诗人是最富裕幻想的,保持距离,让一份美永远存留~中秋快乐!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-23 21:21:17 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

蟠多拉的盒子一但打开
美好的鸽子将飞出想象之外

发誓这一生不戴眼镜！！！问好半溪明月诗人！！多日不见你好吗？

呵呵，还不错! 有点忙了,早上还追了尾,没什么大问题~中秋快乐,谢谢海军哥的问候!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-23 21:26:09 Post subject:

蓝冰 wrote:

呵呵, 朦胧的美. 问好月亮

问好蓝冰!中秋快乐~

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-09-23 22:30:45 Post subject:

非要举起望远镜月球的表面全是伤痕。。。。。摘掉眼镜看到的是“别样的”“你”——问好。

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-09-25 15:54:32 Post subject:

非要举起望远镜月球的表面全是伤痕有味！问好半溪明月！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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