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一幅图画钓出的旧作---<弦>
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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 15:59:01    Post subject: 一幅图画钓出的旧作---<弦> Reply with quote






<弦>

静, 把夜唤醒
你可听见
如弦的月, 颤落空无声?

天籁之音吟前世
天籁知音古难寻

或许, 一曲高山流水, 可以
传诵千古知音的佳话
那断弦的
瑶琴, 纵然碎成星星,
到哪??
去追寻子期
的亡灵
... ...

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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 16:10:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好啊。
看来,白水亦古亦今的手法是最纯熟可观的。定位在这里也很好。有自己的风格不容易。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 16:20:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢NOBODY. 当时有位诗友回帖挺有趣, 临屏和她一首. 一并贴这, 全当忆旧吧.

icecanadaice wrote:
被你的诗歌整的,一晚上仰望苍穹追寻子期,现在脖子疼!哈


白水 wrote:
谢谢风动, 菲雨,江南,ICE.

旧体诗可打油, 新诗可否一试. 临屏了:

不要说, 眺望
仰痛了你的玉颈
不要说, 星光
刺伤了你的眼睛
当黎明的太阳终于
跳出了苦海
你是否想过
用两个音节编排
优美的乐章
让电子流的波涛, 荡涤
破碎的瑶琴

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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 18:15:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

好美丽的画面.

美丽的背影和爱犬
蔷薇色的晚霞满天


欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-17 21:22:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

高山流水觅知音,弦断瑶台追子期
诗情画意流百世,丹桂花香飘万里

白水的古典结合现代很有风格,欣赏! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 03:12:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

<弦>

静, 把夜唤醒
你可听见
如弦的月, 颤落空无声?

天籁之音吟前世
天籁知音古难寻

或许, 一曲高山流水, 可以
传诵千古知音的佳话
那断弦的
瑶琴, 纵然碎成星星,
到哪??
去追寻子期
的亡灵
... ...

------非常欣赏你的佳作。以“静, 把夜唤醒”的角度切入,真可谓:大音无声,空灵、高蹈,天籁之音抑或野生的音乐,即使伯牙在世,“到哪?? /去追寻子期/的亡灵”以极具空茫的诘问结尾,给读者留下极大的想象空间,余音绕梁!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 05:31:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

瑶琴摔作弯月
每一弹拨,都会有一颗
星星
坠落
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 15:08:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

如弦的月, 颤落空无声?

让人惊心的诗歌!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-20 12:33:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

听了音乐 来读文字 好舒服 !!!

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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 06:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

郭野曦 wrote:
<弦>

静, 把夜唤醒
你可听见
如弦的月, 颤落空无声?

天籁之音吟前世
天籁知音古难寻

或许, 一曲高山流水, 可以
传诵千古知音的佳话
那断弦的
瑶琴, 纵然碎成星星,
到哪??
去追寻子期
的亡灵
... ...

------非常欣赏你的佳作。以“静, 把夜唤醒”的角度切入,真可谓:大音无声,空灵、高蹈,天籁之音抑或野生的音乐,即使伯牙在世,“到哪?? /去追寻子期/的亡灵”以极具空茫的诘问结尾,给读者留下极大的想象空间,余音绕梁!




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或许, 一曲高山流水, 可以
传诵千古知音的佳话
那断弦的
瑶琴, 纵然碎成星星,
到哪??
去追寻子期
的亡灵
... ...


知音少,弦断有谁听?哎呀呀,提起这就伤感。更喜欢图片。
跟KOKHO是一伙的。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 14:52:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

图美,景美,语言也灵动,就是“意”不够“新”。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 07:12:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

感情的表达非常流畅,问好诗人
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