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苏幕遮－晨思

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-19 19:26:58 Post subject: 苏幕遮－晨思

雾晨迷，思绪重。历尽辛酸，浓墨丹青弄。蛩咽仲秋人未懂，怎奈西风，抛泪诗魂动。有哀弦，声隐痛。雨老梧桐，随意光阴送。问季节何时掌控？长久花红，岁岁三春共。

晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-20 19:36:47 Post subject:

有哀弦，声隐痛。问候一声！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-21 04:44:43 Post subject:

斑竹一支清泪滴，却把诗魂动，问好莹雪。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

梅奈何
童生

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Posted: 2007-09-21 17:57:39 Post subject:

清愁浅唱 _________________ 梅骨傲严寒，风霜奈我何 http://mnhtt.blog.sohu.com/

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-21 19:08:43 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

有哀弦，声隐痛。问候一声！

谢谢点评！周末快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-21 19:11:41 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

斑竹一支清泪滴，却把诗魂动，问好莹雪。

谢谢黄兄点评！顺祝中秋快乐！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-21 19:12:54 Post subject:

梅奈何 wrote:

清愁浅唱

谢谢点评

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-21 19:48:35 Post subject:

感人的诗情画意.

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-09-21 20:40:43 Post subject:

雪．中秋快乐．每天开心点．祝福 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-09-22 00:52:31 Post subject:

莹雪，思往日这里不押运啊。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-22 18:21:45 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

感人的诗情画意.

谢谢JJ点评！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-22 18:24:24 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

雪．中秋快乐．每天开心点．祝福

谢谢祝福，好的，我一定努力。 Razz

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-22 18:29:30 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

莹雪，思往日这里不押运啊。

谢谢扶正，输入马虎了 Embarassed

白云闲人
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Posted: 2007-09-22 20:42:19 Post subject:

好一首情景交融,抛泪诗魂动的苏幕遮! 问好!保重! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-22 22:38:49 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

好一首情景交融,抛泪诗魂动的苏幕遮!
问好!保重!

谢谢关注和点评，问好！

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