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白天和黑夜的争论

戴永良
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Joined: 28 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-21 04:48:39 Post subject: 白天和黑夜的争论

白天和黑夜的争论漫漫的长夜长的与白天进行对半切割讴气、拉扯，月来调和太阳的趸众不领情人的生命就是劳动白天多了出成果黑夜眼睛潮湿拍着胸膛保证别听他们瞎说相信我，夜就夜睡眠的时间就是不该劳作 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-09-21 05:58:17 Post subject:

睡眠的时间就是不该劳作 THAT IS TRUE

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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Posted: 2007-09-21 15:08:26 Post subject:

诗歌不是科学，要写作者的主观感受。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-09-21 18:02:24 Post subject:

有寓意，如写得灵动些会更好 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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