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虚构的事物
桔子
秀才


Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 214

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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 15:04:25    Post subject: 虚构的事物 Reply with quote

虚构的事物

一、房间

时间里腐烂的桃子
它的果核
被灯光不停地抚摸
柔和细腻的桃木桌
充满诱惑
贪食的蚂蚁上紧发条
在阴影部分爬行
月亮的秒针嘀嗒
甜蜜充斥着每一刻
窗外,树影婆娑
地面上撒满细碎的斑点

二、情书

从眉宇间抽出笔芯
蘸昨夜的雨露
描摹花花绿绿的蝴蝶
一只。一只。绝尘而去
清淡的笺页上
你的手指婉约
流利地写下
茉莉花式样的小楷
简洁,惹人喜爱

三、玫瑰

一朵玫瑰
在烛光的相框里盛开
香味从书案上飞旋
盘升,节节高远
思念的灰烬
落定冰冷的房间
谁在案头书写一瓣瓣相思
红烛销魂
流泪到天明

四、魔笛

海盗船穿过我的耳管
顺中枢神经一直向
天顶的波浪际驶去
我心狂燥,愤怒,暗礁云集
目光中箭雨成簇
射落桅灯,迷航,触礁,撕裂
七窍流血。悲壮的笛声
涌动,翻腾,挣扎着
残骸在脑海中久郁不散

五、灵魂

悠扬,婉转,曼妙
身材轻盈的少女
驾着洁白的翅膀
在雪山,草原,湖泊,巉岩间
飞翔。可爱的少女呀
你就是思念的女神
我们轻声地呼唤
归来吧,回到爱的港湾
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-14 15:51:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

清丽, 隽秀的小诗. 喜欢
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金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2007-09-20 22:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好你
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kokho
进士出身


Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 02:13:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢 一种现代感。。


[ 朋友 要人家凭你的贴,你也要来多来回贴哟。。]


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William Zhou周道模
探花


Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-21 02:59:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

“灵魂”是真实的存在而非“虚构的事物”。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2007-09-22 00:40:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

还是〈房间〉不错

〈魔笛〉名字好,可惜,写的很勉强,完全没有现代感和诗意。
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