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短诗三首
淡水
童生


Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 82

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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 07:21:59    Post subject: 短诗三首 Reply with quote
命运

我看到叶子的姿色
饱满
一面仰向阳光，一面俯视土地
只有滚落以后
才可能翻转过来
再翻转

2007，9，16

背上的唇印

从拥挤的公交车下来
卸下疲倦
许多人超越我
留下淡然的笑
急煞过的公交车
在茫然中
没有一点回声

2007，9，17

习惯

一位女孩
左手夹烟
左手举杯
动作一样地淡雅
我想起小时候
举起左手发言
那样地格格不入
娘胎里带来的
自然就好

2007，9，17
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 15:01:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
精短的好诗！！！问好！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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淡水
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PostPosted: 2007-09-19 10:51:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
精短的好诗！！！问好！

多谢海军。俺现在只想写短的。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-09-19 19:31:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
灵动, 生动. 欣赏
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-09-20 12:23:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有味道。。。

[ 朋友 一起来回贴哟。。。]

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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淡水
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 04:26:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
灵动, 生动. 欣赏

多谢白水。
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淡水
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 04:27:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
kokho wrote:
很有味道。。。

[ 朋友 一起来回贴哟。。。]

。

多谢kokho。
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子花
秀才


Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-09-21 18:27:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
后两个好！！
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