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农夫*梦

蓝冰
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Posted: 2007-09-20 11:20:44 Post subject: 农夫*梦

农夫*梦恶梦醒了, 终于悟得一个"空"字空境, 空灵, 空门莫过于秋收的后花园荒草寸生的痛寥寥无几的游客顺手摘取三瓜俩枣, 嘻笑而去唯有农人倾空了自己的背囊, 还把仅剩的一块石头(或者可以说是一颗无血可流的心)也埋进土里 IT'S OVER YES! 一切早已过去所有的喧闹如同你清空的磁盘何必再问? 昨天夜晚你突然闯进我的梦境捧着半截老鼠啃咬的玉米沮丧地说秋深了, 月光好冷我拥紧那双摇醒惊梦的手臂喃喃的说, 是的, 好冷的月光窗外, 一刃新月面无表情

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-20 12:38:28 Post subject:

喜欢这种天马行空的诗歌：） mark 看到一定很高兴。。。 [ 朋友一起来回贴哟。。。] 。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-09-20 15:06:23 Post subject:

比较注重意象的选择和意境的构造。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

蓝冰
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Posted: 2007-09-20 19:47:23 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

喜欢这种天马行空的诗歌：）

mark 看到一定很高兴。。。

[ 朋友一起来回贴哟。。。]

。

天马行空? 谢谢你喜欢.

MARK 是谁呀?

蓝冰
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Posted: 2007-09-20 19:50:16 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

比较注重意象的选择和意境的构造。

谢谢阅评. 你和楼上的朋友感觉很不同呢.

戴玨
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Posted: 2007-09-20 20:31:55 Post subject: Re: 农夫*梦

蓝冰 wrote:

...还把仅剩的
一块石头(或者可以说是一颗无血可流的心)也
埋进土里

覺得這樣對意象自作解釋不好。
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白水
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Posted: 2007-09-21 05:56:37 Post subject:

提起来, 大家再评.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-09-21 21:48:01 Post subject:

感觉很好的诗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-23 02:00:34 Post subject:

意境有梦幻的感觉～

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-09-23 02:17:26 Post subject:

喜欢这种情调和情境。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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