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◎静物
千里
秀才


Joined: 30 Jul 2007
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千里Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-18 02:58:36    Post subject: ◎静物 Reply with quote
◎静物

侧躺在床上
整片玻璃墙，贴着
下午的安静

使我一动也不动地睡去
短暂地，不再翻动
日子里的

画面，过去的现在的
以及那些应该有的
2007.09.13 4:20 pm

◎一个，片段

在。清晨的时光里
我一一清洗，那些
留下过夜的杯盘，扭开

上个世纪末的抽油烟机
一支5mg 中南海，点燃昨夜
窗外的浪花

此刻，风睡在风景里
只剩，水龙头下倔强的水流
声。以及，白磁烟缸里
我升起的　炊烟

安　安　静　静
安　安　静　静
2007.09.16 —18
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杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-18 05:35:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
语言的感觉极好
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杯中冲浪.披履而行
http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 05:45:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
更喜欢第一首～
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千里
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千里Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-19 20:20:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
更喜欢第一首～


谢谢冲浪和明月

更，谢谢明月的： 更
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迪拜
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2007-09-19 22:07:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
<静物>

表达得比较充分
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