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无题（2007-9-16）

sgb
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Posted: 2007-09-18 23:55:50 Post subject: 无题（2007-9-16）

无题（2007-9-16）文/SGB 是晴朗的夜空弯月跟着走了一段路象远方的朋友时不时跃出一份牵挂月是明亮的即使如冷丝般滑过质感无法逃避露浸得深了仿佛有了更多的孤独其实夜深不管任何人的事这弯月也不管谁的事但飘落的秋叶碎了蝉的梦秋夜的清静又怎样来表述如果有一塘池水月光下的影子该是很饱满的诗意吧那就留住带给枕边的梦境一定很香

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-19 04:51:06 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友. 欣赏!有自己的感受.语言也很清香. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-19 08:21:19 Post subject:

欢迎国斌兄弟光临

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-20 12:28:10 Post subject:

很有感觉形象的浮动还可以再强一些：） [ 朋友一起来回贴哟。。。] 。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-09-20 19:06:53 Post subject:

语感较好。文字简略。富有诗歌的节奏。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

sgb
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Posted: 2007-09-24 16:02:34 Post subject: 谢谢楼上各位的评阅。

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Posted: 2007-09-25 01:25:36 Post subject:

拜读　问好　：）［朋友　除了发贴，多给诗友们回帖哟。。］。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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