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梦 回 童 年
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 20:17:36    Post subject: 梦 回 童 年 Reply with quote

梦 回 童 年


————司马策风


啪地
一声脆响
陀螺在飞旋
将白发拄地的拐棍
旋为少年手上的蜻蜓扑闪

欢笑与鞭声
迷藏似绕缠
一声噪耳边
一声搂腰间
那是儿时无解的快乐结
那是笑声在空中爆开花的童年

笑声化做蝴蝶
夹成小学教科书的书签
笑声飞进时光隧道
一转身
黑发已雪飞霜染

2006,4,5

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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 20:22:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

愉快的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 20:37:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

那 是 笑 声 在 空 中 爆 开 花 的 童 年
一 转 身, 黑 发 已 雪 飞 霜 染

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很漂亮的两句。问好
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 20:43:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢岛主光临。有灰扫灰,无灰就扫叶吧。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 20:44:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢 下一个偶像是野兽 光临赞扬

握手
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 20:25:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

小改两字。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 20:18:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

来生童年!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 22:27:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
来生童年!


感谢金金光临阅评。握个!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 14:21:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

似有两个键误字:
躁 --- 噪, 楼 --- 搂
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 14:43:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人追忆童年!问好司马兄!!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 21:58:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
似有两个键误字:
躁 --- 噪, 楼 --- 搂



非常感谢周兄仔细阅读和帮我发现了别字。

再谢周兄
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 23:12:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动.合理.


欢笑与鞭声
迷藏似绕缠
一声噪耳边
一声搂腰间



诗形也象陀螺

好梦妙语总堪说!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-18 23:53:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

那是儿时无解的快乐结
那是笑声在空中爆开花的童年
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 17:09:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
生动.合理.


欢笑与鞭声
迷藏似绕缠
一声噪耳边
一声搂腰间



诗形也象陀螺

好梦妙语总堪说!



感谢韩兄光临阅评和感言。握个!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 17:11:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

sgb wrote:
那是儿时无解的快乐结
那是笑声在空中爆开花的童年


感谢sgb阅评。

良好的问候
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