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冰激凌三首
梅初
童生


Joined: 10 Aug 2007
Posts: 25

梅初Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-18 14:28:18    Post subject: 冰激凌三首 Reply with quote

◆ 快,爱

从侧面看
我眼角的皱纹
我鼻子上的几粒雀斑
我弧度不算完美的
嘴唇,及
落了三十年嚣尘的睫毛
暗影以及灯光
一点点
移动的架子和时间


我真的
可以成为你视觉中的女人吗
享受一个下午
你用调好的油彩、视角
一只手颤抖着
画我的身体


我们都不是
一张白纸,血液里尚有足够的温度
我们心知肚明
我们迫不及待靠近


于是
省略掉
肉体,那最高尚的一部分



◆ 孤独

我如此孤独,孤独而寂寞
像后半夜
一只找不到血源
趴在白色墙壁上的秋蚊子


我失眠
渴望一盏灯的陪伴,但
怕有人突然醒来
怕听
晨曦穿过窗帘的声音



怕秋
带我往深处走



◆ 冰激凌

我坐在秋风中哀叹
直到满树的叶一片一片
飘下来
身体很空,像曾经
装过白金钻戒的红丝绒
方盒子



夏天诱我
释放了所有的
墨水、体香、荷尔蒙
时间一秒之后枯萎
桃花瓣暗暗消失



我像氢气球
像冰激凌
随心抛弃的杯桶
我把秋风、秋雨、秋凉、秋夜
装进自己的身体
顺便装进一弯西天的
银钩


等月圆之后
第一场雪
缓缓落进我的身体
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梅初的寒园:http://blog.sina.com.cn/yxixi
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-18 14:38:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

等月圆之后
第一场雪
缓缓落进我的身体
问候梅初诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

迪拜Collection
PostPosted: 2007-09-18 16:45:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

两首诗歌写的都不错
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