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伤感不如怀恋

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Posted: 2007-09-12 19:14:27 Post subject: 伤感不如怀恋

伤感不如怀恋 ————司马策风你是我花飘彩雨的春梦你是我风转黄叶的秋思你是我狂潮破堤的夏洪你是我飞雪洗心的冬祈你是我混沌的阳光和牧师你是我韶光的界碑和天使你把我怯懦打造成移山的勇士你把我矮小拔高为擎天的柱石你养花哟又葬花难道你竟是复活的黛玉你媚笑生我冷眼死我莫非你是神仙的魔女为何水晶会化成晴天的雪泥为何爱城原来是蜃楼海市上帝要我们半只苹果找到苹果半只红绳却总是半个苹果栓上半个梨子你把心碳燃烧为炉火的美丽我把心碳锻压成闪光的钻石没有你我寂寞拥有你却更孤寂情的烈火未必能点燃灵魂的火炬谁能一次就翻中魔术的底牌谁不知悲剧总是套演着喜剧无论城里和城外都是一出戏情意不绝滚滚来淘尽多少男和女沧桑道一句流水落花的叹息幸运讲一个恩雨天光的传奇我失手的破碗迟早被埋葬成古董千年后自有人发掘它独特的寄意冥冥长夜中你我流星来相遇谁能不心醉呵那闪光的魔力欢歌吧这交会时互放的璀璨祝福吧那下一程未知的神奇即使天雷碎我为心蚕一粒我也将人生五味吐作放光的虹霓请让风雨为我呐喊喝彩吧我必定从这梦壳中去重振飞天的金翼 2004，5 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-09-12 19:47:59 Post subject:

青衫湿…… 直抒胸臆的一曲，很喜欢

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Posted: 2007-09-12 20:12:33 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

青衫湿……

直抒胸臆的一曲，很喜欢

多谢七七美女欣赏夸奖！得美女赞扬，那可是添寿的好事哟。

万福感谢！
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Posted: 2007-09-12 20:39:50 Post subject:

哈, 那么帅哥赞一个会怎样呢?

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Posted: 2007-09-13 18:06:59 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 那么帅哥赞一个会怎样呢? Wink

得帅哥赞扬当然也会添寿——只是比率不同而已。
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Posted: 2007-09-13 23:09:19 Post subject:

提！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-09-14 21:10:39 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

提！！

感谢扬兄关注提携。握个！
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Posted: 2007-09-16 20:32:08 Post subject:

好棒的样子 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-09-16 22:35:53 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

好棒的样子

多谢阅评赞赏。
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Posted: 2007-09-17 00:14:17 Post subject:

情到深处自难移 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-17 00:33:52 Post subject:

这首不错. 下次要问问你一直保持青春期的秘密. 我怎么就提前进入更年期呢? 哈哈 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-09-17 18:55:40 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

这首不错.
下次要问问你一直保持青春期的秘密. 我怎么就提前进入更年期呢? 哈哈 Very Happy

秘密？只有一个：永保青春活力和真纯——方法嘛有二：

1）不断恋爱

2）或者不断做白日梦

老兄以为如何？
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遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-17 20:41:21 Post subject:

同意一下！！恋爱和白日梦去啦````

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Posted: 2007-09-17 21:13:04 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

情到深处自难移

感谢你深情感怀的关注。
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Posted: 2007-09-17 21:18:07 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

同意一下！！

恋爱和白日梦去啦````

七小姐，你要实践我的建议的话，是否先要问问你的先生呢？

嘿嘿！
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Posted: 2007-09-17 21:31:53 Post subject:

再凝练下可以把它改外很好的歌词～是否琢磨下？不做歌词实在可惜了

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Posted: 2007-09-18 22:11:37 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

再凝练下可以把它改外很好的歌词～是否琢磨下？不做歌词实在可惜了

感谢你光临阅评。感谢你的建议。握个！
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