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忙秋

戴永良
秀才

Joined: 28 Aug 2007
Posts: 194

戴永良Collection

Posted: 2007-09-17 03:40:24 Post subject: 忙秋

忙秋清逸的秋风从天空钻到地里在秸秆的缝隙藏猫谜沙沙的叶声和沙沙的脚步声混在一起顽皮的风呵谁有闲心与你玩把戏玉米挽着小髻低头呓语花生挣断脐带欲要离开母体豆粒顶破豆角也想自由呼吸杂草撅着屁股吹撒种子心软的母亲忙收割累得手颤腿哆嗦父亲一车一车向家里拉成果上学的孩子噢认真捡着路上的豆粒就连年迈的奶奶，夜里也两手摸索着剥玉米于是坏脾气的秋雨薅住风的领子就像生气的父亲把不听话的孩子打翻在地风惊叫一声擦着树梢窜了出去 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2007-09-17 03:54:59 Post subject:

很有儿歌的韵味 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2007-09-17 04:05:38 Post subject:

写出了秋的忙碌．语言不错． _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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