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Posted: 2007-09-16 09:46:28 Post subject: 闻山和诗辑

次韵和冰清<高情> 雨疏风骤动衷肠，满地落红神黯伤。驿使梅花吟雁字，何当煮酒了心徨。附冰清<高情> 君子谦谦锦绣肠，经年不语俩离伤。梅花驿使高情乐，怎忍心斋负恐徨? *驿使梅花,典出南朝宋盛弘之《荆州记》, 用以表示对亲友的问候及思念。 _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 10:08:17 Post subject:

题赠 __次韵征尘载袖 <七绝> 征航诗海泛吟游，尘界交心天下俦。载雅光风高洁处，袖香霁月不言愁。附征尘载袖 <七绝> 更客为宾复客游，深杯扳倒认壶俦。朱楼秀骨门庭浅，一点芳心不识愁。 _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 10:25:18 Post subject:

步韵奉和老山<写在教师节前> 黉舍百年教化功，弦歌不辍迎东风。芬芳桃李鸣阳凤，回沐乡山花样红。 (加拿大/闻山) 附老山<写在教师节前> 三尺讲台滋雨露，粉笔寸寸播春风。更残烛尽寻常夜，欣看年年桃李红。附冰清：我喜欢教师职业! 依韵和一首。爱听雏凤音清脆，悦耳声声是蕙风。我欲从兹携玉润，来年喜贺向阳鸣* *鸣阳凤，比喻敢于伸张正义的贤才. _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 10:33:52 Post subject:

依韵奉和老山《秋红》送爽金风霞满天，层林尽染醉红妍。秋枫赤日怀乡国，四海为家盼月圆。（加拿大/闻山）附老山<秋红> 金风染就胭脂天，万里丹枫竞曼妍。黄鸟无愁知己少，千山飞遍是红颜。 _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 11:01:17 Post subject:

次韵和叶英儿《如梦令-昭君》桃面莺猜蝶妒塞曲黄沙嶂雾马上抱琵琶青冢千秋吟处同步同步震旦叶繁根固 (加拿大/闻山) 附叶英儿<如梦令-昭君> 美貌昭君被妒出塞曲折如雾红袖送香人却载史书深处留步留步社稷依然如固（浙江、叶英儿） _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 11:04:44 Post subject:

奉和叶英儿《鼋头渚》太湖潋滟涌春涛，月地云阶逸兴遨。绝胜江南吴越韵，神鼋震泽领风骚。附叶英儿《鼋头渚》鼋头渚景色真好，多少游人拍几遭。今到无锡要到此，风光山水尽婀姣。 _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 11:05:35 Post subject:

奉和叶英儿《留园》仙馆五峰奇石秀，山房涵碧夏荷香。桑田沧海星辰转，百姓乌衣彩凤翔* *注：借刘禹锡《乌衣巷》诗意。附叶英儿《留园》身价留园万万千，游人多少来寻贤。兴衰成败由天定，自在东山也半仙。 _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-16 13:41:08 Post subject:

琳琅满目！闻山啊，早该出山了！

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Posted: 2007-09-17 21:55:14 Post subject:

次韵和冰清<杂感> 中秋明月挹清香,忍忆离伤泪两行. 恶雨妖风随梦远,心期绿蚁共传尝. 附冰清<杂感> 枫脂千年琥珀香,雁横天末字行行. 葵心仰戴阳光照,淡淡清茶耐品尝. _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-20 12:14:15 Post subject:

次韵奉和冰清 <高情2> 夜凉似水月如霜，世事翻波付大江。秋浦无言眺望处，笛音梦里韵情长。附冰清 <高情2> 袅袅西风一夜霜，丹枫又见落吴江* 征桡放歌清波上，趣兴悠悠情韵长。 * 枫落吴江，借指诗文佳句。语出《新唐书．文艺传上．崔信明》. _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-09-20 19:31:54 Post subject:

闻山老师佳作精彩，提一个~

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Posted: 2007-09-22 01:09:57 Post subject:

闻山霜叶但由坡，一地秋光一地歌。天外忽然风猎猎，飘飘帝子热情多。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2007-09-22 14:58:58 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

闻山霜叶但由坡，一地秋光一地歌。天外忽然风猎猎，飘飘帝子热情多。

次韵回赠并祈斧正

游鱼回首望斜坡，一路寻思一路歌。
九月薄荷风飒飒，高原放目感灵多。

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Posted: 2007-09-22 16:07:34 Post subject: Re: WSH和诗叶

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次韵和冰清<高情>

雨疏风骤动衷肠，满地落红神黯伤。
驿使梅花吟雁字，何当煮酒了心徨。

附冰清<高情>

君子谦谦锦绣肠，经年不语俩离伤。
梅花驿使高情乐，怎忍心斋负恐徨?

*驿使梅花,典出南朝宋盛弘之《荆州记》, 用以表示对亲友的问候及思念。

拜读闻山，冰清几位大作，并祝中秋快乐！

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Posted: 2007-09-24 13:51:04 Post subject:

晨曲高情庆奉觞仲伯叔季热衷肠明月清风吴江美郢唱行云绮梦长

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Posted: 2007-10-02 19:28:44 Post subject:

邀月吟哦共举觞，吴郎桂酒热中肠。冰轮耿耿照今古，乡梦悠悠流水长。 (闻山于加西旅途2007) _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-10-02 19:36:02 Post subject:

次韵和老山<中秋寄台湾雄章兄> 良夕中秋赏月华，婵娟千里共云涯。登楼翘首乡心起，一脉根连两岸花。附老山<中秋寄台湾雄章兄> 又见孤鸿掠碧华，依依两地叹天涯。江楼把酒孤对月，莫使秋光摧落花。 (闻山于加西旅途2007) _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-10-02 19:48:50 Post subject:

次韵和冰清<杂感2> 西厢咒月叹磋跎，沧海经年风雨多。吊影葬花唯一哭，心琴变奏对鲸波。附冰清<杂感2> 沿洄浦海费蹉跎，不语还羞愁更多。或若横柯矜上蔽，岂非曛暮遇鲸波？ (闻山于加西旅途2007) _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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Posted: 2007-10-02 20:58:21 Post subject:

步韵和莹雪<七绝-中秋> 羽曲霓裳舞太空，清辉桂影玉为荣。月轮高挂起心愿，祥瑞承平天地同。附莹雪<七绝-中秋> 广寒舒袖畅游空，幽伴馨芳桂又荣。丢弃世间离别絮，回归仙界再相逢。 (闻山于加西旅途) _________________ 枫叶国-闻山

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