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最后贴个

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-14 21:57:47 Post subject: 最后贴个

《林中曲》从细节开始本次论证。左肩的齿痕咬回去，微笑四散弥漫速朽的石化的记忆还原叶片之绿。略有些硬。这将在百年后昭回一队灰魂我所体尝过的美色皆沦为苦鬼多余的贡品又归了我们。夜会中，误吸了灵能的魔王已经平安入睡独剩我们十个妖骸不眠，收拾残宴歌舞还在回放战败的金羽翼持续飞翔他们将无处栖落，直至久远。而我舔去盘子里良心的灰烬也将无所事事懦弱的人都可以走了我只留一个。你坐正你饿吗？从最白最亮的细节开始我就快要写到你的牙齿

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Posted: 2007-09-14 22:00:59 Post subject:

别最后啊, 我刚临屏接龙呢, 怎么就最后了. 你一走,NOBODY不得泪断他乡

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-14 22:02:16 Post subject:

嘿嘿，你接：－）

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Posted: 2007-09-14 22:09:47 Post subject:

HERE: http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=8108&start=30 刚才已经接完了.

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-14 22:32:10 Post subject:

你这个够鲜亮的

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-14 22:39:44 Post subject:

谢谢。好感动。可惜人家不准随地落泪。早说了吧，白水，还不信。有些人是以背影到来的。不过，她向大家告别。我又不是大家。三轮车票都寄去了！估计下辈子，怎么也到了. _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-14 23:09:41 Post subject:

而我舔去盘子里良心的灰烬也将无所事事懦弱的人都可以走了我只留一个。你坐正你饿吗？从最白最亮的细节开始我就快要写到你的牙齿* 灵异的文字，喜欢～

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-14 23:25:08 Post subject:

至今,我的左肩还在隐隐作痛. 写的真准确! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

jemmy
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Posted: 2007-09-15 00:01:44 Post subject:

看来,我还是不要写诗了,看人家天才的,汗 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-09-15 00:19:24 Post subject:

jemmy wrote:

看来,我还是不要写诗了,看人家天才的,汗

是啊，我们都汗，就让７７一个人写得了 Very Happy

仨石子
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Posted: 2007-09-15 03:50:42 Post subject:

呵呵七七思维就是开阔啊我也在看呵呵 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-15 03:56:23 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

jemmy wrote:

看来,我还是不要写诗了,看人家天才的,汗

是啊，我们都汗，就让７７一个人写得了 Very Happy

两位亚天才, 也不差.

说的太好了, 附议. 我们们们都汗. 刚才贴了几个, 全自个偷偷删了 Embarassed

向天才一鞠躬----
向天才二鞠躬----
向天才三鞠躬----
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nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-15 03:59:25 Post subject:

代我们家77谢谢少君 jemmy明月仨石子. 谢谢了.谢谢,全部谢谢. 乱谢穿破你背心. _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-09-15 05:22:15 Post subject:

这将在百年后昭回一队灰魂我所体尝过的美色皆沦为苦鬼多余的贡品又归了我们。 ------------------------------------------ 好诗 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-09-15 06:54:16 Post subject:

受洛夫影響不小啊, 丫頭. 給他看看去, 看他怎說? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-16 15:33:01 Post subject:

这回我知道他受谁的影响啦！哈！！但很难确认他真的知道Sopor Aeternus，一个乐队。他们更是一群灵魂学家，或者说哲学家。

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Posted: 2007-09-16 15:34:50 Post subject:

Nobody刚贴的什么删了……我跑出去玩儿没看见

nobody
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Posted: 2007-09-16 21:57:33 Post subject:

哇，都三鞠躬了。。。删了刚贴的几个，毫无价值，保护大家视力。贫了一阵了，也开心了。大家的资产阶级反革命感情也加深了。以后七七有空的话，跟大家分享一下对诗歌的见解，点名不点名的批评都可以。说真的，我自己就有个梦想，很多年了。就是有个懂事，woops, 懂诗的人，能指着我写的东西说，这里不好，那里也不好。。。咳，没福啊。我们坛子大家都太客气了，只好把夸得不狠的，当作批评，贪婪地吞下。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-10-02 15:51:51 Post subject:

我所体尝过的美色皆沦为苦鬼多余的贡品又归了我们。夜会中，误吸了灵能的魔王已经平安地入睡独剩我们十个妖骸不眠，收拾残宴奇崛，狂放，小姐人中之杰也...学习，问好。

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Posted: 2007-10-03 07:37:39 Post subject:

左肩的齿痕咬回去，微笑四散弥漫速朽的石化的记忆还原叶片之绿。诗意灵动，令人回味！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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