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一池秋水

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Posted: 2007-09-09 18:06:30 Post subject: 一池秋水

从小我就期盼炊烟能落下停留在家门口的小河里三角洲的风还是那样轻柔城市怀抱着乡村何时姜公的灵魂与沙土一起尘埃我想逃避却在雨林里迷路走不出吴语叮咛我再一次失恋于湿润小巷多少年我眼前总有西施离开的影子把一池秋水留给了江南少女中国.江苏.张敏

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:42:07 Post subject:

从小我就期盼炊烟能落下停留在家门口的小河里——很喜欢这样的起笔。

闲雅
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Posted: 2007-09-10 18:54:15 Post subject:

多少年我眼前总有西施离开的影子把一池秋水留给了江南少女 _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

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Posted: 2007-09-10 21:56:16 Post subject:

谢谢荷梦,谢谢闲雅,问好.远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-12 04:59:46 Post subject:

提一次.清俊. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-12 16:38:42 Post subject:

谢谢韩少君,远握,问好. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2007-09-13 16:54:10 Post subject:

怎么?没有再提呀 _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-09-13 23:14:00 Post subject:

不错的语言！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

上城
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Posted: 2007-09-14 05:38:55 Post subject:

江南的温婉。 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-09-14 21:16:16 Post subject:

感谢杨海军,感谢伤城. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-14 21:45:47 Post subject:

有江南的婉约～

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Posted: 2007-09-15 17:00:00 Post subject:

谢谢明月,问好. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2007-09-20 16:48:23 Post subject:

请大师们指点,再提呀! _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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