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五只眼睛,看最后一只苹果(3首)
郭野曦
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 02:16:08    Post subject: 五只眼睛,看最后一只苹果(3首) Reply with quote

1、枪
在鸟空出的位置
最后一只苹果
压低了一片萧瑟的景致
一颗上膛的子弹
已将最后一只苹果瞄进黑洞洞的枪口
弯曲的食指
却不急于扣动扳机

让她在高高的枝头上
多显摆一会吧
两条腿的鸟
都逃不过枪的致命一击
一条腿的苹果
能跑到哪去


2、甲虫
该谢幕退场了
最后一只苹果,还赖在枝头
不肯离去

一只天生近视的甲虫
碰疼了鼻子
才发觉肌肤鲜嫩的
最后一只苹果
是一位卓尔不群的模特
表演的天才
挑战极限的方式
就是一件一件地剥掉伪装
直至剥出
光洁的裸体


3、鼹鼠
亡命天涯的鼹鼠
被黄鼠狼追的气喘吁吁
鼹鼠恨天下之大
竟无自己的容身之地

鼹鼠停住脚步
稳定一下心神
发觉枝头最后一只无家可归的苹果
跟自己一样可怜

要永远悬挂在半空中吗?
辽阔的大地
难道没有一只苹果
立足的位置
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 05:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

还在细读 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 14:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的借寓而言事, 把世人的心态刻画的入木三分. Very Happy 提读
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:12:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候两位版主,多谢阅评!
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