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七绝赠征尘载袖

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黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-05 11:12:17 Post subject: 七绝赠征尘载袖

七绝囎征尘载袖征尘万里不辞劳尘世相交择友豪载满诗材归故土袖盈清律韵留袍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-05 20:29:37 Post subject:

谢谢黄老师，凑一首，开个玩笑，别介意哈^_^ 黄米入锅辛勺劳，洋洋洒洒举蒸豪。界程自在浑无境，逗煞纤腰短袖袍。 _________________

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-09-05 22:44:24 Post subject:

学习了。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-05 23:12:07 Post subject:

欣赏。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-09 06:45:10 Post subject: 七绝步原韵和征尘

七绝步原韵和征尘征帆远涉乐辛劳尘海茫茫小女豪载舞犹歌诗万卷袖倾美酒湿巾袍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-09-09 07:06:54 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

学习了。

鱼, 怎么还不上高原 Confused

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:43:40 Post subject:

黃裳元吉易中劳，洋溢风流百智豪。界与西南及时雨，义仁堪比泽和袍。 ^_^ _________________

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-10 08:10:55 Post subject:

征夫不顾路途遥尘世纷争不逞豪载酒中流诗兴陡袖中大笔写青袍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2007-09-10 14:12:00 Post subject:

尘世相交择友豪一语破的！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-11 05:03:18 Post subject:

谢谢冰清老师评点，问好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-11 06:19:24 Post subject:

谢谢征尘和诗，“界与西南及时雨“一句，引起我在西南师范学院求学的许多回忆，谢谢您。今天这首小诗，非夫子自况，而是借君芳名，写另类狂士也。征鞍不卸任其劳尘世昏昏胆独豪载酒狂歌马上舞袖飘帽落乱衣袍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-11 14:42:02 Post subject:

黄菊登梢白水遥，洋锵脆管奏矜豪。界开半壁冰清与，斗泻雕章一醉袍。 ^_^ _________________

枫华墨客
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Posted: 2007-09-11 19:32:05 Post subject:

秋色将去春日遥，乱叶难歇女中豪御雨征尘无人境，船歌载袖披锦袍。 _________________ 心灵之旅： http://www.samecityinfo.com/supersite/?23

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-12 12:37:33 Post subject:

征尘巧妙地把本人和白水以及冰清老师都嵌进去了,同时把本人的题头印章也融合进去了,好才思啊! "斗泻雕章一醉袍",构思巧妙! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-12 19:12:16 Post subject:

万里征尘不惧遥，三娘独战众英豪。高原白水黄洋界，墨客松林挂锦袍。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-13 04:29:47 Post subject:

晓松好和，诗友萦怀。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

枫华墨客
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Posted: 2007-09-13 04:51:20 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

万里征尘不惧遥，三娘独战众英豪。
高原白水黄洋界，墨客松林挂锦袍。

呵呵，晓松调理的好。

这位MM也着实有趣。不过，让我看来，却也不象是个MM，有诗为证：

小女十八一朵诗
唇膏粉盒十八只
腹中暗袖十八艺
醉倒仙客十八痴

呵呵，各位也不必拘谨，有我这诗材垫底的，再怎样，也不会厚过我了。

喜欢听MM谈谈诗词，看看，这样的流水般的手指，是否能把诗词也解出些新意来。
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征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-13 07:56:49 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢谢征尘和诗，“界与西南及时雨“一句，引起我在西南师范学院求学的

许多回忆，谢谢您。今天这首小诗，非夫子自况，而是借君芳名，写另类

狂士也。

征鞍不卸任其劳

尘世昏昏胆独豪

载酒狂歌马上舞

袖飘帽落乱衣袍

黄老师，我和了几次，可能是因为阅历不深的缘故吧，总感觉没达到您的意境。后来征求了我哥的意见，他择了这一首——

处世流昏妙醉劳，牵枝摇影妄狂豪。
浮云翘叶何凄切，闲字闲文累袖袍。

^_^
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黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-13 09:45:50 Post subject:

征尘为了和诗，把令兄都打扰了，请代我致谢。征尘如此了得，令兄也定然是咏坛高手，有机会当一并请教。由于角度阅历不同，自有不同意境，不必拘泥，其实，您另辟蹊境，突显个性，这是难能可贵的。不让“闲文闲字累袖袍“，互勉吧！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-09-13 21:03:00 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

黃裳元吉易中劳，洋溢风流百智豪。
界与西南及时雨，义仁堪比泽和袍。

^_^

美眉说“西南 ”，莫非你是我的重庆老乡。你的皮肤白皙，很象重庆人。

至少可能是邻居。

问好
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