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七律蝴蝶梦

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-09-12 21:12:01 Post subject: 七律蝴蝶梦

七律蝴蝶梦 ————司马策风柔情织网心成蛹，蜜语熔金人变仙。一笑吐香萦晓梦，三生联袂造福田。鹰翔半世风难济，帆过重洋港未怜。何苦佳人挥旧泪，应欢骏马系香船。 2004春 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-09-12 21:28:35 Post subject:

何苦佳人挥旧泪，应欢骏马系香船。

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Posted: 2007-09-13 16:10:48 Post subject:

含蓄委婉。

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Posted: 2007-09-13 17:10:28 Post subject:

一般七律三四五六句对仗即可，司马兄整诗全部对仗，鼓掌了！柔情织网心成蛹，生动形象！

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Posted: 2007-09-13 17:59:44 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

何苦佳人挥旧泪，

应欢骏马系香船。

感谢白水兄光临。
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Posted: 2007-09-13 18:00:45 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

含蓄委婉。

感谢老友阅评关注。
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Posted: 2007-09-13 18:02:13 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

一般七律三四五六句对仗即可，司马兄整诗全部对仗，鼓掌了！
柔情织网心成蛹，生动形象！

多谢晓松先生鼓励赞扬。握个！
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