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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 06:39:07    Post subject: <<名月>> Reply with quote

     <<名月>>

挖空心思想一个名字
我不想或不敢喜欢她

名月在我的书包里
成了哥哥的口头禅

名月,在放学的路上
扑棱棱地吓我一跳

我多么想
把名月 想成未出嫁路上的

姑娘

可是
未出嫁的姑娘
只有姐姐

她 天天骂
名月

dead rose
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 06:54:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢少君,还真写了啊,名月和明月,两姐妹哈,有意思~呵呵,不关怎样,收藏了! Very Happy
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 07:00:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

你真休息的如此晚?
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 07:03:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好两位!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 07:04:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
你真休息的如此晚?


恩,你怎么我发现我休息晚的?我才学习回来,单位有几晚上要听课了,现在回来才算开始吧~一般晚上2点多休息,也有更晚的
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 07:06:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
问好两位!

问好山城子老师! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 09:36:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

少君, 我发现你这类临屏诗歌更有活力. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 11:16:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

看来只好成贾宝玉罗
这少君一向正正经经的,怎么突然风流成性

女人多的地方幸福多.虽然我的身边不能美女如云.但我们的园地-----北美枫佳丽多多啊.又养眼又怡神,只要男诗人们不嫉妒,少君献点殷勤也有福了.

你要不要啊
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 05:36:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
少君, 我发现你这类临屏诗歌更有活力. Very Happy



谈不到, 感觉 名月和 明月 有所不同.受明月启发和怂恿 谢白姊夸奖!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 07:08:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
看来只好成贾宝玉罗
这少君一向正正经经的,怎么突然风流成性

女人多的地方幸福多.虽然我的身边不能美女如云.但我们的园地-----北美枫佳丽多多啊.又养眼又怡神,只要男诗人们不嫉妒,少君献点殷勤也有福了.

你要不要啊
 

真人不露像么,JEMMY看走眼了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 07:11:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
少君, 我发现你这类临屏诗歌更有活力. Very Happy



谈不到, 感觉 名月和 明月 有所不同.受明月启发和怂恿 谢白姊夸奖!


你怎么敢叫白水姐姐?连我都要叫白水妹妹的~
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 15:20:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

女人多的地方幸福多.虽然我的身边不能美女如云.但我们的园地-----北美枫佳丽多多啊.又养眼又怡神,只要男诗人们不嫉妒,少君献点殷勤也有福了.

你要不要啊


这是我回复jemmy的,怎么跑到jemmy 名下了.本人决定改正错误,少开玩笑.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-15 14:53:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

少君啊,怎么老整这样的花辞啊!感觉有些无聊,好像那面有灌水区啊.呵呵,诗人的兴致真是要命!!!
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