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钗头凤；七绝（二十首）；五绝；鹧鸪天；诉衷情；临江仙；醉花间；七律；浣溪沙^_^

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Posted: 2007-09-01 05:29:16 Post subject:

七绝竹倚荷塘月倚楼，华胥蝶梦有庄周。啼珠金露香熏鸭，惯逐笙歌醉玉钩。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-01 06:58:11 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这歌真好听

姐姐，小丫让我这样贴歌，说是你听起来方便^_^

谢谢MM, 几年了, 你们总是让大家充满欢乐. 这就是古韵的和为贵么?
说句泛酸的话吧, 真的挺感动的.不能笑JJ Embarassed

为何不开新帖了? 大家也好品评,唱和啊. 玩, 也是学的过程. 只是别要求太高噢. Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-09-01 08:29:56 Post subject:

征尘愈站愈勇, 势不可挡佩服一下 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-09-01 16:39:03 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

七绝

竹倚荷塘月倚楼，华胥蝶梦有庄周。
啼珠金露香熏鸭，惯逐笙歌醉玉钩。

好诗！一幅美景，失敬了，就就着你，练练吧：

香熏叶，玉环钩，新芽吐翠春池皱
独思密，阑珊久，旧雨新磬，箜篌涤透
又，又，又。

呵呵，没有时间，先学半阕
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:20:49 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

谢谢MM, 几年了, 你们总是让大家充满欢乐. 这就是古韵的和为贵么?
说句泛酸的话吧, 真的挺感动的.不能笑JJ Embarassed

为何不开新帖了? 大家也好品评,唱和啊. 玩, 也是学的过程. 只是别要求太高噢. Very Happy

姐姐，感动是对的，换成我，不仅泛酸，还会流泪，说不定还能整出几枚鼻涕泡泡^_^
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:22:16 Post subject:

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征尘愈站愈勇, 势不可挡
佩服一下
Very Happy

老大，你是在夸我的站桩吗？其实我每次站桩都是松垮垮的^_^
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:25:33 Post subject:

枫华墨客 wrote:

好诗！一幅美景，失敬了，就就着你，练练吧：

香熏叶，玉环钩，新芽吐翠春池皱
独思密，阑珊久，旧雨新磬，箜篌涤透
又，又，又。

呵呵，没有时间，先学半阕

谈不上失敬，送个镜子也满好的^_^
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:26:07 Post subject:

七绝细雨疏烟渐沐秋，凭窗凝睇赏诸愁。拈揉均起心尖字，信泪凌毫半纸流。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-02 03:43:25 Post subject:

临江仙恣乐把怀歌纵了，琼楼人远天寒。独生艳质驻华年，淡描唇角线，微掩雀儿斑。巧理娇鬟生酒面，蓉池波皱漪牵。但拈笑口四方怜，横斜影最妙，不似结尘缘。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-03 04:10:20 Post subject:

醉花间浓遒雅，淡遒雅，和尚荷花画。赢得一茅堂，立起葡萄架。闲时谁不惹，佐酒随心写。游眸对景开，牵走乌骓马。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-05 20:28:23 Post subject:

七绝黄米入锅辛勺劳，洋洋洒洒举蒸豪。界程自在浑无境，逗煞纤腰短袖袍。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-07 14:29:20 Post subject:

七律家住燕山道士身，吟诗付与断肠人。岫云凝碧叹香艳，晚景飞霞说伪真。素羽凉摇虚若实，闲情易改富如贫。柳烟不掩流波意，唯恐残蝉一再吟。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-08 02:10:56 Post subject:

浣溪沙昨夜阴阴雨乍收，乱蛩辞燕别成秋，塘蛙独自立桥头。流水落花依旧去，按毫飞墨许谁留，火炉烟袅紫砂瓯。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-09 19:07:19 Post subject:

七绝黃裳元吉易中劳，洋溢风流百智豪。界与西南及时雨，义仁堪比泽和袍。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-10 03:33:20 Post subject:

越读越有味儿，真不知道这位MM是哪里来的这些神思呢，看样子，还会书法，画画呢。对景拈诗竹亦张轻点淡墨花愈狂始信春色心上有何须古人借华章 _________________ 心灵之旅： http://www.samecityinfo.com/supersite/?23

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Posted: 2007-09-10 06:11:33 Post subject:

七绝信笔游神墨自开，无心插柳思还来。琴棋书画花诗酒，一点灵犀一点才。 ^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-11 00:13:53 Post subject:

一点灵犀一点才不遇知音扉不开花儿有芯蝶儿落采些香魂妆羽白 _________________ 心灵之旅： http://www.samecityinfo.com/supersite/?23

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Posted: 2007-09-11 14:39:49 Post subject:

七绝雕琼镂玉天然白，恰似凝酥淡薄灰。匀脸露华繁蕊竞，谁知壶里梦幽回。 _________________

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七绝黄菊登梢白水遥，洋锵脆管奏矜豪。界开半壁冰清与，斗泻雕章一醉袍。 _________________

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