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[原创][荷月秋思]
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 06:51:22    Post subject: [原创][荷月秋思] Reply with quote

[原创][荷月秋思]

诗/梦君诗画两翼

秋天拉长夜的身型

揽抱情人的影子睡眠

秋风女人的纤手

点中身上的笑穴

秋雨爱人的眼泪

夜间遛哒荷塘观光

月亮潜入水底

偷窥藕断丝连的约会

荷花伸长脖子穿越水面

寻找繁星里的牛郎

荷叶风雨中伫立

守候着今生不变的爱情

青蛙不断重复古老的歌谣

鱼虾面前尽显八面威风

落叶划破宁静的池塘

荡漾起感情的秋波

2007年9月6日
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 14:48:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

“无“中生“有“,诗人的专利。 Very Happy
感受即存在。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-07 15:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

好意境!!握!!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-09 02:00:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
“无“中生“有“,诗人的专利。 Very Happy
感受即存在。


多谢问好
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PostPosted: 2007-09-09 02:01:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
好意境!!握!!


多谢赞赏,问好
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