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司马策风
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Posted: 2007-02-14 21:10:35 Post subject: 爱一个人好累

爱一个人好累 ————司马策风守一颗心好难爱一个人好累还不如假装已酒醉也好掩饰酸苦的眼泪守一颗心好难爱一个人好累我何不站为风中的玉树也好享受小兔撞来的滋味守一颗心好难爱一个人好累我能否化做无边的沼泽你只能深陷不能撤退我敬酒举的是情海决堤你回手却在天平上放杯莫非你是我前世的债主要我今生爱你来赎罪谁又真的在意风多还是雨少只要那彩虹能让我们心醉看那潮拍红日洗我心扉我的春燕呵你何日再重归 2004。7 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-02-14 22:17:09 Post subject:

感情饱满。朗朗上口。我想很适合谱上曲，唱起来一定好听！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-02-14 23:02:26 Post subject:

对酒当歌 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-02-14 23:34:47 Post subject:

爱一个人好累我何不站为风中的玉树 -------------------------------------- 这句很精彩问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-02-15 07:32:36 Post subject:

酸甜苦辣尽在诗中.问好

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-02-15 08:35:41 Post subject:

赞成沙漠的建议,把它谱上曲，唱起来一定好听. 祝新年愉快. _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-02-16 02:13:58 Post subject:

很好的歌词。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-02-17 00:52:04 Post subject:

感谢沙漠的灵犀。最初的想法就是写成既能读的诗，又可谱曲能唱的词。新年好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-02-25 23:10:16 Post subject:

我时常看着我忙碌而虚无的过活在这世间，不去拥有的东西也许可以很多。但是我一直坚信，我还会有爱，有如楼主所说的那样的为了爱而感受到的“累”。并且一直坚信自己的血液里还有某种超纯的爱的能力。活着真好，有爱真好。 _________________ 在心的残缺处去完整诗的美丽 QQ：33179345 msn:wuxizhuo123456@hotmail.com 个人主页：http://hi.baidu.com/xizhuo欢迎光临。

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Posted: 2007-02-25 23:56:11 Post subject:

hehe 这么动情！！！

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-03-16 00:54:37 Post subject:

感谢月光情怀的长篇感言。握手 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-03-16 00:59:14 Post subject:

感谢下一个偶像是野兽夸奖。有你的这句共鸣，岂能是“野兽”发出的呢？ _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-09-08 17:40:52 Post subject:

月光情怀 wrote:

我时常看着我忙碌而虚无的过活在这世间，不去拥有的东西也许可以很多。但是我一直坚信，我还会有爱，有如楼主所说的那样的为了爱而感受到的“累”。并且一直坚信自己的血液里还有某种超纯的爱的能力。活着真好，有爱真好。

对月光情怀致以迟到的的感谢和良好的问候。
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游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-09-08 18:00:18 Post subject:

谁又真的在意风多还是雨少只要那彩虹能让我们心醉是啊，真爱又有谁在乎痛苦和累呢？ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2007-09-08 18:10:59 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

谁又真的在意风多还是雨少
只要那彩虹能让我们心醉

是啊，真爱又有谁在乎痛苦和累呢？

感谢老乡黄兄阅评感言。
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Posted: 2007-09-08 18:57:15 Post subject:

谁又真的在意风多还是雨少只要那彩虹能让我们心醉执著的爱、刻骨铭心的爱！欣赏！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-09-08 21:19:21 Post subject:

爱是很累.但不必守. 老兄手法多多啊! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-08 22:13:01 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

谁又真的在意风多还是雨少
只要那彩虹能让我们心醉

执著的爱、刻骨铭心的爱！欣赏！

感谢彭兄欣赏鼓励。握个！
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Posted: 2007-09-08 22:37:32 Post subject:

很诗歌谱曲呢，ＪＥＭＭＹ，ＫＯＫＨＯ都会，喊他们试试～

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Posted: 2007-09-09 10:40:07 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

很诗歌谱曲呢，ＪＥＭＭＹ，ＫＯＫＨＯ都会，喊他们试试～

感谢阅评关注。谱曲，我自己也会呀。
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