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回到舊金山

博弈
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Posted: 2007-09-05 23:26:12 Post subject: 回到舊金山

到舊金山　　回到舊金山　　　　剛回到舊金山該打電話的打電話 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-06 03:33:19 Post subject:

呵呵，诗人在发密码电报？

博弈
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Posted: 2007-09-06 08:38:37 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

呵呵，诗人在发密码电报？ Very Happy

是有此意.

詩法上於此, 小代表遙遠,不重要,大代表接近,重要, 前半段也有飛機下落降滑的形象喻. 今天剛到, 鬧個即興.
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-06 08:59:54 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

呵呵，诗人在发密码电报？ Very Happy

是有此意.

詩法上於此, 小代表遙遠,不重要,大代表接近,重要, 前半段也有飛機下落降滑的形象喻. 今天剛到, 鬧個即興.

呵呵，有意思～

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-06 15:07:20 Post subject:

学习：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

爱松
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Posted: 2007-09-06 16:44:59 Post subject:

来昆明玩啊！

Lake
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Posted: 2007-09-06 17:23:36 Post subject:

字形大小的变化代表了作者的心情呢。真个是心潮逐浪高。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-09-07 16:48:44 Post subject:

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博弈
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Posted: 2007-09-07 19:15:16 Post subject:

爱松 wrote:

来昆明玩啊！

謝謝.
會的. 感覺上天高皇帝遠的世外
昆明, 妳好. Smile

對少數民族的幻想, 亦曾是我的一個夢.
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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-07 21:07:03 Post subject: Re: 回到舊金山

博弈 wrote:

到舊金山

　　回到舊金山
　　　　剛回到舊金山
該打電話的
打電話

博士的诗像摄像镜头，把“山”从远拉近，不错。哎，等离开时别忘了从近推远哦，擦擦眼睛等待中~ Laughing

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