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《丽江行》组诗之哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦——

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-11-10 04:12:20 Post subject: 《丽江行》组诗之哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦——

《丽江行》组诗之哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦—— 酒吧一条街的夜晚灯火辉煌如织人流和串串红灯笼的背后藏匿着柳树、五彩石和小河的游鱼对歌声声此伏彼起众声吼喊响彻云霄哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦—— 这是个狂欢沸腾的古城男人们街上寻奇猎艳女人们更喜疯狂购物兑换一堆古怪的石头和无用的饰品满载而归心花怒放哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦—— 注：哑嗦，哑嗦，哑哑嗦——是纳西人对歌时的结束语，意为“我唱完了，你唱吧——”。 2006-11-9

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2006-11-10 05:46:58 Post subject:

_________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-11-10 16:11:29 Post subject:

抒情得要死 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-11-11 17:10:35 Post subject: 呵呵,谢谢两位老师~

生活能唱,就不要哭~

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-11-12 06:37:02 Post subject:

_________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

白水
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Posted: 2006-11-12 08:03:51 Post subject:

MM, 看大家都那么乐, 我就不多说什么了, 说明你的诗歌给大家带来了欢乐. 建议多写, 同时也多读其他人的诗歌. 问好.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-11-13 03:19:56 Post subject:

谢谢鼓励,我要多向大家学习,不足的地方希望大家多多指点~

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-11-13 18:15:26 Post subject: 呵呵，真热闹！

不过这样的表达和诗歌语言是有距离的！更象游记了！枉评问好！ _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-11-13 20:44:09 Post subject: 我是写的游记~

我是写的游记.我觉得诗歌不应该有什么固定的格式!我用这样的方式只是表达我的一种愉快感觉,呵呵，问好~

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Posted: 2006-11-14 05:01:39 Post subject: Re: 我是写的游记~

[quote="半溪明月"]我是写的游记.我觉得诗歌不应该有什么固定的格式!我用这样的方式只是表达我的一种愉快感觉,呵呵，问好~[/quote] 但诗歌毕竟有她不同于其他文体的表达方式. MM, 让我们一起学习, 共同提高好吗?

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Posted: 2006-11-14 21:24:33 Post subject:

向各位老师虚心学习,问好大家~

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