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《我涉过那河》

新华
秀才

Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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新华Collection

Posted: 2007-09-03 17:50:58 Post subject: 《我涉过那河》

《我涉过那河》新华我穿越那条孤独的小河她拧痛我的骨髓寒流在心底游弋我多想有只拐杖在上面行走或枕着它入眠我找到一片蛙鸣才感到她的力度和烙在脊骨上的这块香疤 2007年9月4日星期二

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-09-03 18:48:32 Post subject:

真情的流露.感人. 小建议, '香疤' 感觉莫如用常用词. 己见, 不妥见谅

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2007-09-03 20:38:07 Post subject:

我多想有只拐杖在上面行走或枕着它入眠。。。。。。。。。喜欢这节。

kokho
进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection

Posted: 2007-09-03 23:22:50 Post subject:

拜读　：）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

郭兴军
童生

Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 96
Location: 中国陕西
郭兴军Collection

Posted: 2007-09-05 04:45:22 Post subject:

真情在怀，诗意尽显，欣赏兄弟的真情吟唱！ _________________ 胜者为王。

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