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◎秋天的橘子

千里
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Posted: 2007-09-03 18:44:13 Post subject: ◎秋天的橘子

◎秋天的橘子玫瑰花谢了枣子，据说也落了满地一树的橘子，怀抱沉甸甸的阴谋，去年的竹节依旧挺着一身春风什么都提前了来不及防备，没有时间演练堆砌碉堡的雪没有落下刀光的追杀，一路不曾停过秋风依约立下无字的碑夜里，熟悉的暗香踩着细细的步子，桂花巷八月，匆匆匆匆过一句话也没有说 2007.08.31

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-09-03 19:30:56 Post subject:

去年的竹节依旧挺着一身春风熟悉的暗香踩着细细的步子很好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-03 19:52:21 Post subject:

不错的一首. 八月，匆匆匆匆过 ? 打字重复?

千里
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Posted: 2007-09-04 19:57:07 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

不错的一首.
八月，匆匆匆匆过 ? 打字重复?

啊，谢谢二位拨冗赏阅。

另外，若说
“匆匆匆匆”
一直反复着某一个章节

可以套进白水的问号吗 ?

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