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《雨中的月亮》
新华
秀才


Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 22:13:10    Post subject: 《雨中的月亮》 Reply with quote

《雨中的月亮》
新华
半只眼的月亮在雨中
我看到她的泪水
看不清她的面容

蚊子喘着粗气扑来
我不知
它们是围着我还是它们自己

卯时的闪电绽开弧火
流离的思绪
回炉在一枚针上

我学会刺绣
引用一天的阴晴
就是灵动舒展的诗行

二〇〇七年九月三日星期一
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 22:27:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些表面的意象
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写诗是为了写更好的诗
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 23:33:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

引用一天的阴晴
就是灵动舒展的诗行
.................可深入些.
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-09-03 11:21:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

新华, 可悄悄解读一下你的诗歌吗? 我真没读懂.Embarassed
记住, 悄悄的, 打枪的不要. Wink
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