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《我踩空今天这个日子》
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PostPosted: 2007-09-01 18:03:53    Post subject: 《我踩空今天这个日子》 Reply with quote

《我踩空今天这个日子》
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我踩空今天这个日子
不管她是圆的还是长的
跑着的还是卧着的
埋着灶火的还是漂着葫芦的
破碎的还是囫囵的
挂彩的还是苍白的
数着数的还是画着画的
长着麻醉剂的还是伸着嗓子的
照着镜子的还是跳着脚的
......

踩,踩,踩
不停的踩
我才对得起我这双脚
脚上的老茧
会吃饭的的十个孩子
他们胖的像风
在风的大床上睡着大觉
搂着星星说梦话
嘴角挂着涎水还有余香

2007年9月2日星期日
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PostPosted: 2007-09-01 21:26:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

后一节生动化了

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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 08:04:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏这不受束缚的文字 Very Happy
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