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秋夜
刘华明
童生


Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 75

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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 01:06:56    Post subject: 秋夜 Reply with quote

我相信
一定有什么在加深夜的颜色
比如一只乌鸦掠过窗前像谁遁去的灵魂
比如一个梦在路上邂逅月光的大雪

风不言
是落叶凑足了住宿的盘缠
遍地的金黄翻滚着
宛若秋天散发的传单 萧索而悲凉

把影子还给肉体 灯光四处逃逸
梳妆镜里有我清晨遗失的笑脸

去掉秋风 去掉月光
去掉天空中的阵阵雁鸣
我变得一无所有
我怀疑自己在夜色中所起的作用
是叠加 是削减
还是皈依?
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 03:23:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

去掉秋风 去掉月光
去掉天空中的阵阵雁鸣 ..................状态好.
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 07:51:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

我相信
一定有什么在加深夜的颜色

同感
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 11:56:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

开篇就好!

提,集中展示---------
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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