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又是秋季

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白水
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Posted: 2007-08-28 21:12:32 Post subject: 又是秋季

又是秋季谜雾散去难道仅为秋风? 不敢回眸, 不敢与你对视. 远方的白桦林, 你是也否和我一样试图闭上疲倦的眼睛炎夏去了这本应是收获的季节农人把谷物扬起拖拉机把尘土扬起, 如果卸下那些沉甸甸的劳作你也可以把头扬起来看人们把红高梁, 老玉米悬挂在旧宅的椽子上, 看熟透的棉桃怎样绽开游离的云朵看秋日的阳光如何脱去秋的晨衣晨衣下, 我默默地看解甲的马群咀嚼着遗落的往事

新华
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Posted: 2007-08-28 22:16:31 Post subject:

晨衣下, 我默默地看解甲的马群咀嚼着遗落的往事田园诗读来赏心悦目，图片也很好。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-29 06:40:41 Post subject:

谜雾散去难道仅为秋风? 不敢回眸, 不敢与你对视. 远方的白桦林, 你是也否和我一样试图闭上疲倦的眼睛这段也不错～问好白水妹妹～

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-08-29 08:40:13 Post subject:

很经典写出了感觉 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

常愿桥
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Posted: 2007-08-29 10:07:21 Post subject:

农人把谷物扬起拖拉机把尘土扬起, 如果卸下那些沉甸甸的劳作你也可以把头扬起来好诗好画．白水漂亮吗？这段诗才是诗眼．听说你是女诗人，我更愿高看一眼．当然，我的批评也不留情面．小心哦－－－－－－－－ _________________ 我的诗歌,除了抒情,并无使命!

nobody
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Posted: 2007-08-29 19:14:29 Post subject:

把让白水消化不良的帖子删掉了 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-29 19:24:31 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

把让白水消化不良的帖子删掉了 Laughing

人家说了，你夸人听起来也象骂人 Laughing

常言道, 君子一言,驷马难追. 你可到好, 真是NOBODY. Embarassed

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-29 19:39:52 Post subject:

谢谢新华, 月亮, PEACE的鼓励. 常愿桥(敲), 你的笔名很有趣, 愿敲就敲吧, 敲键盘? 敲毛病? 大家以文会友, 批评不留情面就不留吧．其实批评的帖最难写, 不认真去读还真写不出来, 我应谢谢你才是.

nobody
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Posted: 2007-08-29 20:00:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

常言道, 君子一言,驷马难追. 你可到好, 真是NOBODY. Embarassed

并非不是君子,而是追的马多. Laughing

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I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-30 06:04:55 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

常言道, 君子一言,驷马难追. 你可到好, 真是NOBODY. Embarassed

并非不是君子,而是追的马多. Laughing

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-08-30 06:26:17 Post subject:

心有愁思的秋季。问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

nobody
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Posted: 2007-08-30 06:54:57 Post subject:

laughing, funny, right, lots of them... _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-30 18:46:13 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

心有愁思的秋季。
问好

谢谢理解, 问好

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-30 18:52:43 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

laughing, funny, right, lots of them...

yeah,you are right． laughing, funny, right, lots of them from　nobody. Very Happy

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-08-31 18:27:14 Post subject:

晨衣下, 我默默地看解甲的马群咀嚼着遗落的往事耐品的好诗好画！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-01 06:47:37 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

晨衣下, 我
默默地看
解甲的马群
咀嚼着遗落的往事

耐品的好诗好画！

谢谢品评. 还盼多提不足

新华
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Posted: 2007-09-01 18:15:32 Post subject:

秋思，秋情，秋景——好大一个秋...

仨石子
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Posted: 2007-09-02 01:13:00 Post subject:

有感觉的句子学习呵呵我要多学习啊 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

仨石子
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Posted: 2007-09-02 01:14:47 Post subject:

很耐读经的住推敲呵呵 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-02 07:56:51 Post subject:

谢谢新华, 仨石子. 问好

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