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晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-08-31 20:04:32 Post subject: 戏赠白水

闯荡江湖南共北，行侠仗义终无悔。风高浪险何足惧？唯要当心张恨水。（此人惯于使暗器。）

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-08-31 20:08:12 Post subject:

晓松, 谢谢你, 我个性直白, 好多朋友都有和你相似的提醒, 不过还算运气, 截止目前还没遇到过张恨水.

hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106

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Posted: 2007-08-31 21:31:17 Post subject:

删除好梦哪一节，巧绣丹心黛眉间京华烟云都看遍，白水青山绕胸前 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-09-01 06:52:18 Post subject:

谢谢岛斑打油. 这两天终于从古墓里跑出来放风了

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-09-01 08:28:03 Post subject:

我在那里作音乐功能呢其实, 诗歌没读多少 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-01 10:23:22 Post subject:

辛苦了. 你和袖袖姐妹真是棋逢对手, 将遇良才. 你新音她古韵. 相象的是你们都能想着把自己的快乐与诗友们分享. 让大家能在闲暇时享受诗, 歌的美. 谢谢.

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-01 12:58:51 Post subject:

七律<枫林游> 和晓松, 和平岛赠诗. 诗中嵌诸多诗友名或字, 以赠各位诗友, 有兴趣者不防找找. 一方天地踏轻舟, 枫岛松林任尔游溪水冰清香沁雪, 老山凝重抵中流日出弹剑黄洋界, 月落作歌南海丢闲人悠然神女袖, 听云留墨不言愁因受篇幅, 意境所限, 还有很多名未能嵌入. 先抛砖, 盼引玉, 希望能嵌入更多诗友的名字.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-09-01 13:39:45 Post subject:

厉害，意境也佳真不愧是侠女 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

jemmy
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Joined: 06 Jun 2007
Posts: 414
Location: china
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Posted: 2007-09-01 13:44:29 Post subject:

原来白水真是女性 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

征尘载袖
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Joined: 18 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:29:10 Post subject:

绿水青山一叶舟，琴书棋酒约重游。新鹅偏爱追波草，老燕低飞泛影流。南北西东随意侃，诗词曲赋尽情丢。悠哉惊动长眉客，扯下轻云远送愁。 ^_^ _________________

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-09-01 20:32:52 Post subject:

扯下轻云远送愁这动作多潇洒 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-01 22:57:09 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

绿水青山一叶舟，琴书棋酒约重游。
新鹅偏爱追波草，老燕低飞泛影流。
南北西东随意侃，诗词曲赋尽情丢。
悠哉惊动长眉客，扯下轻云远送愁。

^_^

MM好潇洒.长眉客是什么啊, 是鸟吗 Confused

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2007-09-02 00:12:48 Post subject:

我也给白水一首：白云千载空悠悠，秋水微波不胜愁。夫子一声长叹息，佳人独在木兰舟。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
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Posted: 2007-09-02 05:31:41 Post subject:

"扯下轻云远送愁"一句,轻灵而潇洒,简直是神来之笔,不用"撕",不用"剪", 不用"拽",真是恰到好处,十分传神. 白水巧嵌诗友名,实属不易. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-02 05:44:51 Post subject:

姐姐，长眉客一般是指高寿之人，这里借指神仙^_^ _________________

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-02 05:46:01 Post subject:

谢谢黄老师、岛老大^_^ _________________

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-02 07:13:27 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

姐姐，长眉客一般是指高寿之人，这里借指神仙^_^

哈, 我以为是白头翁(鸟名)呢.真服了你们这"南北西东随意侃，诗词曲赋尽情丢"的神仙MM了.
真害人, 害得我一点静不下心干别的事, 就看你们乐了. Twisted Evil

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-09-02 07:24:11 Post subject:

jemmy wrote:

原来白水真是女性

问好JEMMY, 在网上叔叔,阿姨GGJJMM都被称过,就差没人叫DD了. 于我, 这些只是个编号 Wink

白水
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-09-02 07:36:59 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

我也给白水一首：

白云千载空悠悠，秋水微波不胜愁。夫子一声长叹息，佳人独在木兰舟。

谢谢鱼.

步韵和一首

七绝<继续嵌名戏说秋叶>

蝶飞蜂舞乐悠悠, 轻扫他乡一缕愁
极目银河八万里, 何需望月叹孤舟

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-09-03 13:44:33 Post subject:

也赠白水一首：万里情牵一叶舟，诗龙酒虎会良俦。朝朝咏絮同心语，金景无涯醉眼收。

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