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五百年的爱情(外一首)
冯六一
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 08:22:48    Post subject: 五百年的爱情(外一首) Reply with quote

(五百年的爱情)



飘雪了 你不离去

山裂了 你不离去



一条道路四通八达

一条藤呢 咬住苦难

坚守一棵树



鸟儿还在歌唱

风儿吹过秋天的泪水

风儿吹过世间的传奇



你反复涂抹色彩

你反复种植爱情

一日的盟誓

长成了五百年的风景



(山泉所想)



一滴水发光

一线山泉发光

一条大江流发光



人往高处走

走成移动的山峰

水往低处流

在沙漠的底下往上看

那就是一条闪闪的银河



水珠的银河

星星的银河

照亮一个朴素的愿望

让天下的人都有水喝
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 13:42:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

清纯而美的诗歌!!常 来,多交流!!握!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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冯六一
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 17:06:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候朋友.周末愉快.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 17:41:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

简洁自然的语言, 深沉的情感. 提读
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