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让我安静的目光（外一首）

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-31 04:34:28 Post subject: 让我安静的目光（外一首）

让我安静的目光郭文沫使我安静下来的是那些微小的文字和她们柔弱的目光沿着细小的河流源头潮水一样泛红血液里那些奔腾的溪流就有了方向三十多年要走的地方布满了秋草的芬芳一瞬间一片叶子或者一朵小花安安静静打量着多事的秋天与遍地牛羊和满坡绿草无关这个下午天是阴沉的水一样的目光推开心灵的门窗这个下午我坐在八月最后的一天里开始我无法安宁抑郁发作顽疾抽打脆弱的心在疾病还没有完全发作之前我要一剂止疼膏贴在那些散漫的文字上郭文沫，女，70年代生，甘肃省庆阳市作协会员，《敦煌》诗刊论坛版主，90年开始发表作品。至今在《国际日报》、《大别山诗刊》网刊、《咸平文艺》、《永德文艺》、《敦煌诗刊》、《黄土地》、《未来作家》、《银川晚报》、《文苑》、《北斗》、《五台山》、《酒泉日报》、《陇东报》、《平凉日报》、《甘肃交通报》等数十家刊物杂志发表诗歌、散文、随笔等一百余篇（首）。诗作被收入《西部诗人四十家》、《陇东诗人》等书。地址甘肃省华池县法院倪荣贵转郭文沫邮编745600 邮箱gwmgyy@163.com 我的博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/gwmo

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-31 04:57:31 Post subject:

这两首状态不错，提给大家读。

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-08-31 17:14:51 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

这两首状态不错，提给大家读。

谢谢赵老师厚爱，请多指点

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-01 06:45:33 Post subject:

的确不错.宁静,朦胧的美

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-09-02 00:40:36 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

的确不错.宁静,朦胧的美

感谢白水老师，问好

博弈
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Posted: 2007-09-02 00:58:26 Post subject:

跟著不錯, 的確不錯. 問好. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

仨石子
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Posted: 2007-09-02 23:39:34 Post subject:

简单 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-09-03 09:07:22 Post subject:

问好。拜读 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-09-03 23:40:03 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

跟著不錯, 的確不錯. 問好.

谢谢您，问好！

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-09-03 23:43:40 Post subject:

仨石子 wrote:

简单

谢谢

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-09-03 23:55:34 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

问好。拜读

问好谢谢

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