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同题诗作：《九月不远》

秦华
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Posted: 2007-08-30 16:01:15 Post subject: 同题诗作：《九月不远》

同题诗作：《九月不远》文/秦华拉开九月的门山风借一道电光潜入秋意灌满来去匆匆的脚步课堂里的书声如潮揣着园丁育树的热情渴望沿着知识的路迈进九月的门拉开九月的门诗雨送一坛深情灌满书丛画卷打磨我心中涌动的诗行五指合拢一江秋水坐在灵感的窗前看夏热远航笔尖流动着飘逸的旋律我梦中飞来的天使擦掉生命中的痛苦和心悸我的希望永存（07/08/30秦华于上海） _________________ <版权所有，转载通知>文学是我的心舟，音乐是我的歌喉，舞蹈伴我常相走，女红勿忘我多彩的时候。简介、地址等在主页：http://qinhua6650.pkm.cn/ArticleDetail.aspx?DetailID=101483

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Posted: 2007-08-30 17:02:59 Post subject:

坐在灵感的窗前看夏热远航笔尖流动着飘逸的旋律很有气势 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-30 22:54:42 Post subject:

我倒觉得很温情的一首：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-30 22:56:06 Post subject:

是很有力的诗歌!欣赏! _________________ 梅初的寒园：http://blog.sina.com.cn/yxixi

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Posted: 2007-08-31 06:40:25 Post subject:

九月是新学年的开始，教师节也快到了。心有大爱的诗歌～

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Posted: 2007-08-31 13:56:21 Post subject:

提！！问秦华诗人近好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-31 15:50:28 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

坐在灵感的窗前看夏热远航
笔尖流动着飘逸的旋律

很有气势

谢谢！写不好也写的少哦，繁事多多，笔涩生疏。见谅吧：）
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<版权所有，转载通知>文学是我的心舟，
音乐是我的歌喉，
舞蹈伴我常相走，
女红勿忘我多彩的时候。简介、地址等在主页：http://qinhua6650.pkm.cn/ArticleDetail.aspx?DetailID=101483

秦华
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Posted: 2007-08-31 15:51:25 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

我倒觉得很温情的一首：）

。。

谢谢！多指正呀，在诗歌里，你们是权威，多赐教！问好！
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<版权所有，转载通知>文学是我的心舟，
音乐是我的歌喉，
舞蹈伴我常相走，
女红勿忘我多彩的时候。简介、地址等在主页：http://qinhua6650.pkm.cn/ArticleDetail.aspx?DetailID=101483

秦华
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Posted: 2007-08-31 15:52:20 Post subject:

梅初 wrote:

是很有力的诗歌!欣赏!

秦华
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Posted: 2007-08-31 15:52:52 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

提！！问秦华诗人近好！！

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