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七绝二首
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 07:38:00    Post subject: 七绝二首 Reply with quote

一 晚年画竹
晚年有兴画修篁 绘叶添枝不敢狂

上下横斜求韵致 心仪此物耐严霜

二 小园种瓜
瓜藤青青日渐高 伸鬚擎叶向青霄

黄花朵朵迎风舞 欲慰丰收汗水浇
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 08:31:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界兄,修篁书画,小园种瓜,怡情养性.很好!
赋一首"七绝"和之:

. . . 雅 兴 . . .
凭 窗 逸 兴 修 篁 画 ,
夏 日 园 篱 喜 种 瓜 ,
养 性 怡 情 风 韵 雅 ,
健 身 益 寿 好 年 华 .
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 09:14:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢百云兄鼓励及和诗,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 09:22:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

绘叶添枝不敢狂

两位诗长好雅兴
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 09:57:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老兄,祈望相互多交流!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 18:05:48    Post subject: Re: 七绝二首 Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:

二 小园种瓜
瓜藤青青日渐高 伸鬚擎叶向青霄

黄花朵朵迎风舞 欲慰丰收汗水浇


欲慰殷勤汗水浇,突飞猛长向青霄。
黄花朵朵结成果,凉拌青丝小酒烧。

黄兄乐在其中也~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 03:11:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

运枝勾叶见幽篁,可向高风借一狂。
锋转丹田应有识,湘妃漉泪与清霜。

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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 03:24:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

藤蔓依篱欲试高,破香隆粉沁云霄。
莫如心稳瓜甜硕,宴谢媒根日夜浇。

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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 11:02:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢晓松,征尘赐和,晓松更生活化,征尘更为洒脱.

二位和诗让我更感到生活之乐趣,更感到年青人的

朝气和活力.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 18:10:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师, 刚才未经你同意把你的电话号码给秋香了. 你不会介意吧 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 19:01:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

没关系,朋友之间取得联络是好事

秋香就是秋叶吧.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 19:44:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
没关系,朋友之间取得联络是好事

秋香就是秋叶吧.


是. 是逸峰想要. 记得吗? 游子吟大赛的第二名, 你写了字画给他的. 他的诗词写的也很好.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-29 23:22:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

上下横斜求韵致 心仪此物耐严霜


欣赏老兄!
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PostPosted: 2007-08-30 05:15:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鱼兄赏评,问好.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 01:53:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

好个"绘叶添枝不敢狂 "
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PostPosted: 2007-08-31 07:15:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢评阅,问好!
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