莹雪
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 Posted: 2007-08-29 17:53:45 Post subject: 秋日硕果 |
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甜美的红色，酝酿了无限欢快
这色有些浓
联想到它曾沐浴春日繁花似锦
也惨遭暴风骤雨的清苦酸涩
甜美的红色，若人生的月历
充满幸福之梦幻，也历经曲折
希望品尝甘果之时，不再有寂寞与萧瑟
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-08-29 18:04:40 Post subject: |
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美好的心灵
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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莹雪
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Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-08-29 18:08:39 Post subject: |
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谢谢大哥关注和鼓励！ 
这几天我有点事儿，预计过几天就正常了。问好大哥！  |
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-08-29 18:49:27 Post subject: |
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很高兴你越来越多的着墨新诗, 这样会更拓宽你的写作空间.
问好MM |
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-08-29 19:02:18 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
很高兴你越来越多的着墨新诗, 这样会更拓宽你的写作空间.
问好MM |
谢谢JJ鼓励，在不丢旧诗词的情况下，我一定会更多的倾向新诗的。JJ要帮我哦  问好JJ |
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金金
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