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七律·感怀

张少林
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Posted: 2007-08-27 04:10:51 Post subject: 七律·感怀

殷殷苦痛尽沧桑，灼灼忧思抑举骧。 意淡曾经山隐树，情浓未必水催樯。 凭他滥取千帆宠，恰我单存一径香。 保重声声随梦寄，云丝缕缕竞悠长。

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-27 04:34:26 Post subject:

意淡曾经山隐树，情浓未必水催樯。凭他滥取千帆宠，恰我单存一径香。意境不错. 问好新朋友

张少林
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Posted: 2007-08-29 01:55:23 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

意淡曾经山隐树，情浓未必水催樯。
凭他滥取千帆宠，恰我单存一径香。

意境不错. 问好新朋友

谢谢！请多批评指正。

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