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蜘蛛纸牌
玲子
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 08:49:10    Post subject: 蜘蛛纸牌 Reply with quote

蜘蛛纸牌

玲子

数字,花色,排列。超生的时候
你必须看三步以上。这些无意义
的门牌号码。进出泰若,但你必须
找到它们。还有你,也将成为其中的一张

你得保证每把密匙的灵敏。排列,花色,数字
严丝合缝。在它们粘连的地方,开启
所有的逻辑顺序,并畅行无阻。保证
不在疏忽的瞬间,闭上锁眼,吃卡或死机。

这样做,该是困难的。对于七七八八
的事情。像流水线上的瑕疵,使其概率误差
在执行标准内。如果百分之正负二被允许
你不能说它们次品,缺陷,或者你自己一无所获



2007-8-25
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 12:25:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

没太懂,但感觉节奏很好.
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 13:25:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

数字,花色,排列。超生的时候
你必须看三步以上。这些无意义
的门牌号码。进出泰若,但你必须
找到它们。还有你,也将成为其中的一张

你得保证每把密匙的灵敏。排列,花色,数字
严丝合缝。在它们粘连的地方,开启
所有的逻辑顺序,并畅行无阻。保证
不在疏忽的瞬间,闭上锁眼,吃卡或死机。

这样做,该是困难的。对于七七八八
的事情。像流水线上的瑕疵,使其概率误差
在执行标准内。如果百分之正负二被允许
你不能说它们次品,缺陷,或者你自己一无所获
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 11:30:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

蜘蛛牌的人生哲理~学习!
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kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 12:19:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好 朋友 一直在提高哟 :0

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