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高原行 路过
阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 07:43:27    Post subject: 高原行 路过 Reply with quote

高原行 路过


我绝望地站在这一望无际的草原上

疲惫的身体和疲惫的鞋偎依


打马路过你的帐篷时

我泪水涟涟

你的草原没有我居住的一角

你的羊群离我远去

这时格桑花的心情阴郁

我的歌声低沉


我想把歌声唱的再嘹亮些

想让怒放的鲜花永久开放

想在草原上常睡不醒

没有驻足,没有路过
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 08:43:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

高原行性情的抒写,真挚,诗意还可铺展,个见问好.
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 11:08:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想把歌声唱的再嘹亮些

想让怒放的鲜花永久开放

想在草原上常睡不醒

没有驻足,没有路过


草原总是让人留恋~问好阿琼~
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PostPosted: 2007-08-27 12:19:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象和文字都平淡了些 :)

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舒中
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 16:47:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

羡慕琼裙高原行
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PostPosted: 2007-08-28 18:39:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

我绝望地站在这一望无际的草原上

我一直再想"绝望"两字怎讲. 草原是令人开阔之处啊
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