迪拜
同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588
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 Posted: 2006-11-03 00:03:48 Post subject: <风景> |
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坐着轮椅
矮了一截
看到的
就不一样了 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2006-11-03 04:19:06 Post subject: |
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| 有嚼头的一手. |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2006-11-03 19:30:12 Post subject: |
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| 迪拜, 寓意不错, 略感直白. 短诗的确很难写. |
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迪拜
同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588
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| Posted: 2006-11-04 20:42:36 Post subject: 多谢 |
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有同样的感受
确实有难度
谢过二位~~ |
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和平岛
举人
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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| Posted: 2006-11-04 20:45:19 Post subject: |
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很有潜力的一首短诗
令人回味
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写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2006-11-04 21:22:28 Post subject: Re: 多谢 |
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| 迪拜 wrote: |
有同样的感受
确实有难度
谢过二位~~ |
回音壁
有求必应
而我们并不在乎
我们听到的回音
只是模糊卑微的自己
不来自上帝
不知你是否喜欢非马老师的这首, 我读了好几遍, 才慢慢悟出味, 很浓. 再读, 又悟出点别的味. |
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维鹿延
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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| Posted: 2006-11-07 09:04:04 Post subject: |
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深入浅出。
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散步者身体里面的声音 |
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迪拜
同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588
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| Posted: 2006-11-07 17:16:40 Post subject: 一种希望 |
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谢谢各位评点,
"看到的/就不一样了",有两种理解
----卑微,被别人的曲解
----希望,别人看不到的东西 |
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