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一朵花（六首）

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Posted: 2007-08-20 05:05:07 Post subject: 一朵花（六首）

《一朵花》一朵花，季节来临规规矩矩地开放，没有更多的想法所有的花瓣，所有的花蕊，所有的色彩在光天化日之下，毫不掩饰蜜蜂飞来，蝴蝶翩翩而至，浅吟低唱掠走原本不多的花粉，原本不多的甜蜜独留亲密后的思念寂寞地孕育 2007-5-16 《等天黑》如果是下午四点十分我们走着，可能彼此相隔一尺距离手也不触碰一下，不着边际地说着闲话天还亮着，路上那么多不停地转动的的眼睛像一盏盏灯。我们暴露在光天化日之下如果我们沿着长长的人行道，一直走着不知道你内心是否忐忑不安等着黄昏来临天慢慢暗下来 2007-5-22 《黄昏》我安坐于山坡古道两边，树林荫翳，石阶上光影斑驳离我不远不近，无情无欲的样子清风徐来，不见落花飘飞三清宫门前的那幅对联，我百思不得其解如堕入一团迷雾里我起身，倒一杯茶，热热的，端在手中天上的云，去留无意，落日余晖色彩格外美丽 2007-5-23 《天热了》临近中午时光后山更是另一个世界，农人还在挥锄距离很远，看不到湿淋淋的汗水被翻过的草皮，在酷热的阳光下，会慢慢枯萎一只绿色小蜥蜴，在我相机镜头下快速奔跑，无所畏惧坡陡，它没有翅膀不会飞翔 2007-5-25 《江面》从桥上望去渔船，红色很显眼，黑鸬鹚站成一排不见打鱼人，舵和桨，它们都很悠闲江面很宽，船很小，不间断的流水声桥上车来车往，噪音更大。钓鱼人，比我更有耐心不说话，盯着长长的丝线桥很高，水很低，阳光很远。我转身微波荡漾的江面看不见我的影子 2007-5-20 《再访梨花》小路，通向山里两旁的梨树，层层叠叠，一眼望不到边挂满了青青的果子我这次来，不合时令说到梨花，已经是若干年前的事情花很白，像蝴蝶，落满枝桠想起来那么遥远天空灰蒙蒙的，那年那天的夜里，我喝醉了心里很清醒第二天，进山的时候，天空下着小雨我的皮鞋沾满淤泥 2007-5-23

冷巉
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Posted: 2007-08-20 06:46:40 Post subject:

《江面》《再访梨花》。问好！ _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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Posted: 2007-08-20 09:08:59 Post subject:

等着黄昏来临天慢慢暗下来《》天黑了，会牵手吗　？　。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-20 15:52:32 Post subject:

读来舒服的诗 _________________ 广东汕头潮南区峡山镇广祥路753号黄雪兰转黄史丹收(515144)

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Posted: 2007-08-21 03:59:11 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

《江面》《再访梨花》。问好！

谢谢，亲切问好！

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Posted: 2007-08-21 04:00:24 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

等着黄昏来临
天慢慢暗下来

《》天黑了，会牵手吗　？　

。

还仅仅握手吗？

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Posted: 2007-08-21 04:01:21 Post subject:

小衣 wrote:

读来舒服的诗

问好，小衣！

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-21 05:14:46 Post subject:

不错！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-21 15:56:19 Post subject:

再提起来

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Posted: 2007-08-22 21:57:38 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

再提起来

再次感谢，读帖，回帖的朋友们！

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Posted: 2007-08-23 18:38:16 Post subject:

<一朵花> 写的不错.

顾小花
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Posted: 2007-08-23 20:10:19 Post subject:

来看阿秀的花. _________________ 春风吹又生:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1285636777

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Posted: 2007-08-24 18:19:52 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

等着黄昏来临
天慢慢暗下来

《》天黑了，会牵手吗　？　

。

kokho关心的太多了，人家这叫留白，就是给你想的～ Very Happy

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