| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-10-21 09:06:38    Post subject: 磨房 |   |  
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				| <磨房> 
 张开双臂
 挂成黑色的十字
 钉一个不解的魔结
 立地日行八万里
 谁能转动这水注的星球?
 没有影子的你
 一定是鬼了
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 磨房外
 东方升起的是金
 西边陨落的
 是
 玉
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		| 和平岛 举人
 
  
 Joined: 25 May 2006
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 Location: Victoria, Canada
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				|  Posted: 2006-10-21 10:34:20    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 雕刻得不错 
  _________________
 写诗是为了写更好的诗
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		| 杯中冲浪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-10-22 05:11:59    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 和平岛 wrote: |  
	  | 雕刻得不错 
  |  入"石"三分
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-10-22 05:15:07    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢北方狼.
 应该不算太朦胧吧, 十字架, 地球, 太阳, 月亮还有鬼.....
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		| 鹤雨 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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 Location: 上海
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				|  Posted: 2006-11-03 03:02:40    Post subject: 很耐品的一首! |   |  
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				| 拜读学习了! _________________
 愿意和大家共同进步!
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2006-11-04 05:00:27    Post subject: Re: 很耐品的一首! |   |  
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				| 谢谢, 常交流
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