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凤凰台上忆吹箫（三首）；扫地游；五律；七律（十首）；七绝（十首）；拜新月（五首）

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Posted: 2007-08-18 21:50:19 Post subject: 凤凰台上忆吹箫（三首）；扫地游；五律；七律（十首）；七绝（十首）；拜新月（五首）

凤凰台上忆吹箫搜袜征尘，索声载袖，酣酣醒似犹眠。敛几咏、题香醉墨，修个悠闲。倚遍孤烟独浦，偏忽地、惊认琼仙。心游处，隐姓逸名，影照空轩。歌回被花怨恼，无奈得，疏狂意下尊前。最难管、莲娇笔瘦，泪滚珠圆。来去由人逗巧，留我等、高会余妍。何须问，谁肯向此耕田？ _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:10:13 Post subject:

这个沙发我先坐了^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:16:46 Post subject:

无罪释放。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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疏狂意下尊前。最难管、莲娇笔瘦妙这个姑娘似曾相识呀 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-19 06:29:04 Post subject:

放在一起比较一下，觉得一下子长大啦

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排除法而已，继续^_^ _________________

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是你的姐姐还是妹妹呀或者就是你自己你又是谁呢 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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征尘载袖 wrote:

凤凰台上忆吹箫

搜袜征尘，索声载袖，酣酣醒似犹眠。
敛几咏、题香醉墨，修个悠闲。
倚遍孤烟独浦，偏忽地、惊认琼仙。
心游处，隐姓逸名，影照空轩。

歌回被花怨恼，无奈得，疏狂意下尊前。
最难管、莲娇笔瘦，泪滚珠圆。
来去由人逗巧，留我等、高会余妍。
何须问，谁肯向此耕田？

又一位新朋友，而且有照片，一看就是MM，欢迎一下！
搜袜征尘，索声载袖，酣酣醒似犹眠。不俗。信手取诗中“征尘、载袖”为笔名，真个是心游处，影照空轩。

近来北美枫坛才子才女不断，正是：
和平岛上梧桐树，招引八方彩凤来。

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Posted: 2007-08-19 12:52:19 Post subject:

这是谁家丢失的小猫，　好可爱．欢迎一个．本想学一首相和，　却没能从我带来的书和ＰＥＡＣＥ诗词库里找到词牌，　又懒得在其它网站找，　只好换个词谱填吧 http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=7512

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Posted: 2007-08-20 05:46:47 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

是你的姐姐还是妹妹呀
或者就是你自己
你又是谁呢
Laughing

你说的这个女孩儿，年龄比毛毛还小几天，没有满汗全溪大，总之没有我大^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-20 05:52:46 Post subject: Re: 凤凰台上忆吹箫；

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搜袜征尘，索声载袖
征尘载袖不是取自词句，而是嵌入词句，因为这首词是我写的，而且是首次发表，不是别人写的，所以不能说取，只能说嵌^_^
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白水 Moonlight wrote:

这是谁家丢失的小猫，　好可爱．欢迎一个．

本想学一首相和，　却没能从我带来的书和ＰＥＡＣＥ诗词库里找到词牌，　又懒得在其它网站找，　只好换个词谱填吧 Embarassed

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=7512

姐姐说的这一体我知道，当年李清照就是用这一体发出凝眸处，从今又添，一段新愁的感慨。

姐姐稍等片刻，我和一首玩儿玩儿^_^
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凤凰台上忆吹箫拈扇弹罗，醉心痴话，度来些许能言。说乞求梭巧，搅海翻田。休慕牛郎色鬼，窥裸浴、娶媳瞒天。娘娘怒，挥钗划溅，鹊系姻缘。堪怜，一双子女，箩担载凝眸，夜夜河边。叹黯霜匀着，千古童颜。虽有浓愁幽恨，皆化作、风挽云闲。云闲远，追欢几番，似雾非烟。 _________________

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扫地游试翻一曲，问答友行书，甚情堪灭？酒赊砚绝，念离魂杳杳，怅怀对月。泪卷流横，便作移山叠雪。引愁却，又折柳赠香，挥手招蝶。丢汗凝玉节，把古镜秋磨，独娥孤阙。揭皮入骨，剔脓疮烂肉，止凉消热。拾叶涂心，比画柔刀利割。缘因孽，孽因缘、孽缘如设。 _________________

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五律空明悬玉镜，箫袅沁波澜。高树蝉增甲，长堤马卸鞍。梦回风不定，人散席难看。一缕幽香至，藕花犹自欢。 _________________

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七律云游虚界雨游丝，一曲琵琶一处思。欲遣断魂还似恨，微颦双黛不由痴。帘垂深院门窗掩，身近残棋笔砚离。争及歌阑谁念我，不如小试几人知。 _________________

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七绝环溪十里独游醉，九月薄荷颇惹怜。唯恐人人见偷得，笼纱诓语梦魂牵。 _________________

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