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《大呼吸》

孙慧峰
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Posted: 2007-08-18 22:05:22 Post subject: 《大呼吸》

《大呼吸》 ——是夜听筝曲《呼吸》银丝线先轻轻钩起，顿然一送！劈、抹、挑、勾、剔、打、摘、托。天地之大音自所有缝隙推搡而至—— 慢揉。轻揉。颤音无痕，哪怕流莺乳燕，得知消息？一声铮然划破静谧的长天一色！上回转滑音。下回转滑音，推挽之间，多少虚滑换得水滴石穿？我自五千里之外前来倾听，倾听锋利的长水哗然流泻！是谁的弹拨穿透重重迷障把习习的指尖渡过河来？有犬吠，权当序曲；多少泛音化作柔情藏入铁骨，自肋缝。自沟壑。是你尚未出生还是我早就来过？透明的婴儿把手指塞进笛孔。水啊水啊，桨扶青苔，舟行曲径，有百摺裙么？有暗藏不出的丰满与滑腻么？这是谁点点染染不再有所离舍背离的一生？竹林容清秀，玉指谈吐清波！怀抱虚设，那人在碧玉深处身腰凝固。曲折啊，细雨筛落，瓦片上一只秋蝶独坐。如何消瘦至简洁？新娘恨柳稍，九月柳稍压低眉梢！月色。白雪。飞蛾。无须正见，佛已在头顶安置。一堆乌云不是寻常物，左手相拂，右手相托！那夜色是谁按揉出来的一腔遮掩？不必燃烛虚构，不可寒暄落花旋涡里的一两花粉、三生阳光、一腔芳草！蟋蟀长吟，秋日在一只花猫的瞳孔里端坐。牡丹太绝艳！葵花太琐屑！天堂鸟不盘旋，箜篌居然无喉！木阁楼。水灯仰首。此刻适合放逐放逐舌尖于口腔之外，放逐野狼于纸上山谷！悬腕。落鸿。晴蜓点水。西风读窗。云起处自有百摺魂魄出落！曲折如委屈后的挣然抗然，为人当得横平竖直，有不可仿拟之轻描淡写！既属于此刻，就不畏惧肉身被弦索弹遍褶皱！断音、虚按，成吨好恶，用斜线销去！这瓷器啊！扣摇。打圆。近撮。这檐角挑起的风中流月！我故作虚弱，任毛发攀援上台阶，俯身献木星，星上夜色闲走！这千年的宕跌！双耳莫名树立！把银子慢慢研碎散入天地肺腑，把羽毛轻轻梳理纷披于比翼之侧。云绞弦。水并弦。高山上烧热花朵与音色何饕餮！基业已成，磐石悬空而不碎！鹿角桀骜，我不能道尽的陡峭竟来自良宵清澈！我被吹拂。我被吟按！我被众弦沿岸拾掇！此一生顺流而下，木筏轻捷，竹笠倾斜！千里徘徊音信绝，转辗回来仍是布满新花的故道！且弹拨！且孤独！百年一揉成齑粉，撒作来生真月色。 23:38 2007-8-13 注：诗中涉及到各种筝的指法，不一一列举。《呼吸》http://www.chidanna.com/blog/images/music/huxi.mp3 明天星期几:http://blog.sina.com.cn/sunhuifeng

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-08-18 22:33:26 Post subject:

不愧是大诗人的做派不过，涉及到专业，具体的，就不懂了，只一看，已经天花乱坠。

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:13:59 Post subject:

好像一首　奏鸣曲一般的魅力　　：））。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-19 04:20:04 Post subject:

庞大的意象群，等吃了饭早来慢慢细赏～但浏览了一遍就觉得该加精华的诗作～问好！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-19 09:57:39 Post subject:

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-08-19 11:02:06 Post subject:

明月,你想直接加EMBED,是行不通的这个软件不支持其实很简单: mp3, wma: 选 stream rm: 选 RealPlayer .swf: 选 Flash 两下，中间放ＨＴＴＰ，就行了

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-19 12:24:19 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

明月,你想直接加EMBED,是行不通的
这个软件不支持

其实很简单:

mp3, wma:
选
stream

rm:
选
RealPlayer

.swf:
选
Flash

两下，中间放ＨＴＴＰ，就行了

谢谢岛，你说了，是很简单，可是不知道的时候一直都是晕的，这下我可以休息去了，累死我了，一晚上就为发个这音乐～

nobody
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Posted: 2007-08-19 14:15:54 Post subject:

壮观。半溪明月贴的音乐也很好听。谢谢。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

kokho
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Posted: 2007-08-19 15:02:58 Post subject:

好音乐　很配合这首诗歌　：）　　。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-19 18:12:25 Post subject:

好！真正的现代诗！！！问候慧峰兄弟！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:24:00 Post subject:

跌宕起伏, 廻肠荡气又不显的刻意而为. 诗歌, 音乐, 思绪浑然一体. 这种诗歌的确值得静心细品. 谢谢分享. 精

小衣
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Posted: 2007-08-20 15:51:52 Post subject:

呵呵~大呼吸! 我家以前就有一古筝,小时把玩,只是略懂 _________________ 广东汕头潮南区峡山镇广祥路753号黄雪兰转黄史丹收(515144)

婉儿
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Posted: 2007-08-21 18:41:56 Post subject:

大手笔, 再顶个

博弈
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Posted: 2007-08-22 08:37:05 Post subject:

不錯! 物我內外挑剃一下... 間有詞曲味不夠細緻仍有堆砌痕跡當精益求精用字用韻還可再精如能多引箏聲韻入字更妙期待二稿, 直言可諒 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-08-23 06:18:17 Post subject:

一次诗歌的享受! 谢慧峰明月----------- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-23 06:38:04 Post subject:

无须正见，佛已在头顶安置。.............大气.

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-08-24 01:39:32 Post subject:

很具功力的一首!学习! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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